nice

I didn't see that one coming - ouch. Bill didn't earn twelve OWL's for nothing, though. He'll find them out.

nice plot, i surprisingly like the thought of Harry and Fleur cheating

Harry a cheater? It sounds... probable, according to me Bill/Fleur is a terrible pairing, and i also imagined Ginny very jealous and a secret affair between Harry and Fleur would be interesting... ihope you'll write something else about it.

Hah! Cute... a bit messed up with the two cheating, but cute none the less. I will say that next time, if you want to keep it authentic, see what you can do to generate Fluer's Accent. Azzie (Gryff prefect?) is french herself, so she'd probably know how to help you mimic the sounds if you wanted to ask someone at any point.

Outside that, a fun, short read. Ya did good, lil one. :P

Oh my... Really Harry? Cheating? Tsk tsk... But it was a good plot none the less. ;)

I need more... now!

This was good I always liked the idea of Harry/Fleur he would do well with someone older and the lack of love in his life makes Harry and a Veela a good match given they are being of love. I think the beauty of Fleur and the fame of Harry mean they have similar problems with people and would understand each other well.

I never liked how the Weasley's treated Fleur and I think Bill would be a bad match for Fleur long term the same with Harry/Ginny.

I liked how things were going between Harry and Fleur a good end to the chapter but sad too since both Fleur and Harry are married to Weasley's.