| Reviews for Threshold |
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Guest chapter 3 . 3/9/2018 reread this story really makes me feel CG's expectation of love from did a very good there is a new idea: what will happen when gill accidentlly find out Cal kissed Shazzer that same day? I am a devil |
CocoGuest chapter 2 . 3/13/2015 Oh oh oh ... I am loving this fiction SO much. You are so adept at pulling the bits and pieces of their story into a coherent and fluid whole. I am so glad I came upon this and wish you would come back. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2012 I just LOVED your story!Thank you so much, now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside ;) |
JustMyPillow chapter 3 . 8/24/2012 I LOVED this story. Your view on the characters and your way of developing these episodes are very much fascinating. I've really appreciated your style too, quite unique and downright elegant. I hope that you haven't given up with writing LTM fics, in the meantime many thanks for sharing this piece. |
Harmony Goldstar chapter 3 . 8/7/2012 I enjoyed this! Especially the ending... hehe. |
TAC chapter 3 . 7/15/2012 This was adorable! I thoroughly enjoyed it...though my girlfriend was laughing at the me pretty much every time I squeed out loud, lol. Thanks for a great story! |
pjstillnoon chapter 3 . 5/4/2012 quite enjoyed this thanks :) particularly admirable of the unique conversation of them getting together in the end. also thought your arguments for cal's behaviour over the episodes (and season3) were a logical and somewhat convincing theory. |
spinoza-off chapter 3 . 4/15/2012 I get what you mean, but it was a really good transition from friendship to romance! And may I say I greatly appreciated the fact that you didn't make it perfect and all-in-one-blow romantic? Cal's first (or second, if we count the kiss-while-on-drugs) attempt of a kiss was not entirely successful and the way he reacted (badly) seemed totally in character. As did Gillian's reactions of surprise and anger. Plus, I totally, completely enjoyed the very subtle hints of humor you allowed yourself in your narrative style: for example, when you wrote "mainly the anger" when Gillian woke up and remembered what happened, I laughed a little in complicity, not with Gillian but with the writer. Then I appreciated the taps and smacks to Cal's head and Cal's irritation at them, which made me laugh too, this time more openly because the situation was overly funny. There are just so many things I could mention. Like the subtle way you changed the tone with that "Of course I bloody care" that opened the discussion to the new meaning. I have to thank you for that because, hell, it's not easy to master the art of subtly avoiding cheesiness while you're writing romance. Kudos! To sum it up: this story is delightful, funny and very sweet in a really subtle, delicate way. And it's truthful to the show to a ridiculous degree. And I love it! |
Roadrunnerz chapter 3 . 4/15/2012 Finally got around to reading this and LOVED it. I think you did an awesome job with the transition from friendship (and anger and frustration, lol) to the romance. If if did happen on the show, it's exactly how I'd expect it to play out. Not sappy...but still full of love in their own unique way. lol "You read people so much that you've forgotten about verbal communication." Aint' that the truth? So apt. And I loved this: - "In love with me yet?" This time her eyes twinkled with laughter, and she said, "Almost." "Hurry up, will you?" "Okay." It only took two days. - :) Perfection. Thanks for sharing. |
bluecube76 chapter 3 . 4/14/2012 Absolutely amazing, I loved it. These are some of my favourite scenes as well and the way that you have melded them together, but also added your own bits, it was just great reading. Thank's. |
NinaWS chapter 3 . 4/14/2012 I absolutely love this story. I signed up just so I could review & tell you. I loved your take on those 3 great episodes & the ending is just superb! Thank you. |
CommonFlower chapter 3 . 4/13/2012 Loved this so much! You did well in writing and representing them. At least it is believable. The scene at Cal's front door was emotional good and a bit amusing. It's a new way no one has written before and I really like this. It's a pity, I think, that you don't have more reviews! I'd wish it for you! Hope to read more soon! |
tina-gillian chapter 3 . 4/13/2012 Great story,love this very much! |
spinoza-off chapter 2 . 4/13/2012 "It wasn't conclusive. And now he'd lost his most useful weapon." Masterful twist. It always bothered me that the writers didn't go thru Cal's motivations for his game with Wallowsky. I did understand he was using her in regards to his complicated relationship with Gillian, but the extent of his attraction to Wallowsky was never fully developed and you made a wonderful, very credible job of covering it fully. As for the rest of the chapter, it's really heartwarming. Cal having to choose between his need of pure friendship and his need to push Gillian to the edge so she slips something was a really cool way of developing the idea and of connecting the previous chapter with this one. It flows really well; better than the actual show, I think. Great, great story. |
Roadrunnerz chapter 2 . 4/12/2012 Loved this! I think you did such an amazing job filling in the blanks here and there (cool concept, btw!). You merge the actual scenes from the show with yours so effortlessly. Especially the Gillian/Emily conversation. Always wished they would've had some more scenes together on the show. And of course the last part was great. :) |