And...an excellent narrative decision to resort to the wide range of blues and grays of the eyes of Peter to reflect his moods and the physical presence of the wedding band, reinforcing the deepth of their link.

One of the best depictions I've read of the wonderful couple who make the Peter and Olivia of the future. Ignoring the fact of the end of the world and the tragic death of our girl (what was a hypothetical future born of a mistake that will never happen) may be my favorite POlivia. And it's incredible how precisely and accurate your writing has collected it. Complicity, naturalness, normalcy. And unconditional love. The safety of having one another but still (and always) the excitement of passion, physical attraction. Beautiful and exciting, and quite, quite sensuous, enough to loosen the legs to the toughest of the readers. Do not tell a sensitive fangirl ...

Simply breathtaking...

You wrap so much feeling and delicious tension into the words on the page. It's elegant and incredibly beautiful.

Lovely. You have their voices completely. Love it!

Can I be your best friend? Wow. Just wow. LOVED this. Every bit of it. So cute and funny and beautiful and just plain fantastic. This the best p/o story I've read in a long long time. And they're married! *squee* You are quickly becoming one of my favorite fanfic writers ever! Your syle and characterization are fabulous. Keep up the gorgeous work :')

I don't review a lot of stories, but. Holy Hell, woman.

I feel like every part of my being is on fire. There are no collection of words that could accurately describe how gorgeous and beautifully executed yours are. As if the magnificent story you're telling wasn't enough, the vivid detail and expertly navigated metaphors are enough to make even a lobotomized individual cry for days.

There is literally nothing that could compare to this. I have read a lot of stories in my life, but I am reeling in the fiercest, but subsequently best ways. I'm flustered beyond all reason, my heart is swelling from the grace of your narration, and my brain is having a hard time managing coherent and efficient thought at this juncture. Reading this demands the same kind of tender care, compassion and love that a lover would give to another. Because it deserves it in its entirety.

Bravo, amazing, brilliant, congratulations, fantastic... none of those words work, because this story transcends that group of insulting words. This is something more, something wholly effervescent that exceeds dalliance in every way.

You are a true artist, and your words have done a thorough job of slaying me to pieces.

Simply amazing in all conceivable ways.

This, my dear, is one of the the best things I've read here on for a while. You have such a lyrical prose, it's easy to get lost in the words and let the rhythm carry you along. Feels like poetry. And then you go and write a hot, sweet polivia story, when they're married! And I thought things couldn't get any better...

please keep writing :D

This is perfect! I love cocky Peter and deliriously in love Olivia. Great chapter!

Can I love you forever? FOREVER AND EVER REALLY. I mean, you had already killed me with your author note because OMG YOU are the sweetest one here :') I feel incredibly honored because your fanfics are so wonderful, and I'm only telling you the truth and being my usual flaily fangirly self. And then it so happens that the story you dedicated to me is a MARRIED FUTURE!PO STORY. You cannot imagine how much I ADORE married future!PO. They are my top favorite kind of PO. Ever. So yes, I was a gonner before I even started reading.

Then I read and was screaming really loudly inside (mostly because I read it while in the theaters waiting for Titanic to begin, otherwise I would have been screaming in my pillow). The love in this...I cannot even find the words. The love and need and reciprocal adulation, it's just so beautiful. I've always loved the banters between them on the show, and their dialogues in this just changed me into a grinning fool, so adorable and sweet and lovely. And then there is the...physical closeness, which positively turned my insides into goo (yeah, movie theaters, not the best place to read that kind of fic). Also, how she's so in awe of the fact that they are married and that they have the rest of their lives to live together *SCREAMING* *IGNORING HOW SHE DIED IN 2026* *DIDN'T HAPPEN*

It was truly beautiful, beautiful and full of love, and my heart is bursting with PO!love (MARRIED FUTURE!PO!LOVE ASDFGHJKL). You made my day, my weekend, and month really. And I shall keep on loving you and your gorgeous writing forever, in all my creepy, fangirly ways :')

*Elialys*

Love this story soo much!

Ah, very nice! I can almost see the air sizzle! Thank you for writing and sharing!