| Reviews for American Harry Potter Book 1 |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 8/1 Good fanfiction but 2 things that stand out to me. 1) Grammer needs some work. 2) Why does harry get bossed around by some girl HE JUST MET, I know it’s not that big of a deal but I hate fanfics that have the mc get bossed around by anyone like that it’s just so annoying to me and even more so when he’s getting bosses around by someone HE JUST MET. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/26 i'm sorry to say your characters are REALLY annoying, the girls especially and all the twin speak and pranks is not my thing. Good luck with the story. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/31/2019 7n42 86 |
 Realmsmith chapter 1 . 8/21/2019 You need to make the characters not bipolar. |
| Rebmul chapter 2 . 7/19/2019 lily seems to care about harry but the fact she forgot its his birthday as well makes her a bitch to |
| Regular-Sized-Man chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 i like this already |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/1/2019 Salem, Salem! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/1/2019 Salem |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/1/2019 You must have Salem win. |
| Harry Potter fan chapter 7 . 3/31/2019 I think that the dueling competition should become the internationalMajor Magical Dueling Olympics of magical schools. America, France, and Argentina shall be present for this major event. And you shall have Harry Potter win 8 humungous golden medallions per hisglorious victories on the dueling platform at the Awards Ceremony, he will only duel eight, 8, people, No mor, no less. |
| Sun chapter 3 . 6/21/2018 If the school is in America, shouldn't some of the student's names be American? |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 16 . 6/10/2018 Pathetic. |
| Monster King chapter 16 . 2/21/2018 Great story I really liked it good job writing the story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2018 Good good |
| Kris chapter 9 . 1/23/2018 It seems a bit unlikely that Michael would have 1000 galleons in cash on his person. |
