Reviews for The Darkness Within
Cecilia chapter 1 . 8/15
Wow this has been so good so far! I am dying to know what is going to happen next! WELL WRITTEN~
erikablair chapter 9 . 7/25
really good story, would love to see an update
kassidysjade chapter 9 . 12/15/2019
Wow, this was such an interesting concept! I have never read anything like this for Catoniss. Every chapter kept me guessing; I loved the unpredictability! I know you’ll probably never return to this story, but I would have loved to see how you built their relationship back. Thanks for such an amazing read! Everything seems so realistic to Katniss’ character, which is always appreciated. I hope that you’re doing well, wherever you are. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself with us :)
I like it but chapter 9 . 11/8/2019
Plz write about what happens next. Really good
Anamika H chapter 7 . 8/8/2019
This is really well written! Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 9 . 2/9/2019
Hi you always say you’ll reply to every review and now you’ve really been gone for a while so can you come back and say that he didn’t cheat on Katniss because that breaks my heart if he did! Agh so much, so maybe if he almost did then thought better if it please. But to do that you have to update! Katniss shouldn’t give herself to him without asking and working everything out first! Please come back
Cestrenes97 chapter 1 . 8/14/2018
please please please update!
Nic Craft chapter 9 . 2/14/2018
Hello there! I absolutely love your story. It's a great twist on things. For a second, I was worried that you were going to implement the original Quarter Quell rules and you added something totally different. I love it. It's so awesome to see a different side to Cato. I would love to see where this story goes. I'm not sure if you still write anymore, but I hope you do because you've got too much talent to simply give it up. Please finish this story! You have a very loyal fan. :D
CatonissANDKarvel4Life chapter 9 . 7/20/2017
OMG UPDATE
nyx'godness chapter 9 . 6/17/2017
I don't think that is what Cato wants Katniss, but she has so poor social skills that she just keeps stepping on to it! I hope you'll update again!
nyx'godness chapter 7 . 6/17/2017
Katniss you really are playing with fire here!
hungergamesluver3 chapter 9 . 5/15/2017
Please, please, please update this story! It's sooo good!
Anonymous chapter 9 . 4/26/2017
I swear I am literally dying inside. I don't know how many times I've read this story over the years, and every time I finish it, a little part of me dies, because this story is amazing and there hasn't been an update for a YEAR now. Please, for the love you bear for your readers, please put up another chapter. You have literally left us with the biggest cliffhanger EVER! Please update. I AM BEGGING YOU.
sadukulelegirl chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
Please please please please please please please please update! I love this fic to the extent I am EATING MY COMPUTER. You are such a talented writer and have been blessed with an amazing gift! So please use it ;)
Don't think I'm getting crabby or anything, I just ADORE THIS TOO MUCH! :D
Ethereal Sphere chapter 9 . 2/1/2017
you ended it there... .. ... ./-there!?-/

cash me ousside howbow dah?

This story has been absolutely AMAZING. Every time you ended a chapter I felt like I was going to explode with excitement during the 0.2 seconds it took me to click for the next one...and now...what will I do with my life? How will I sleep at night?! GOD DAMN YOU!
This was epic.
EPIC. PERFECT. WOW just WOOWW.
Will Cato reject Katniss? Will he NOT? Did he cheat on her? Pleeeeaase tell me he didn't, my heart can't take it. Will Katniss go to the games again? How epic would that be? I hope she does.

I don't usually get this excited over a story. THIS IS A REAL DEAL.

At the start or this fic was like 'oh, well this seems interesting', but the last few chapters - God.

Random person scrolling through the reviews to make up your mind whether to read this or not: READ THIS PIECE OF GOLDEN SH*T. (The heartache and sleepless nights are so worth it.)

Thank you soooooooo much for sharing,
E.S~
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