I loved it! Cute and romantic, a pleasure to read :) I think you described Edward's nervousness before and during both the meetings in the beginning perfectly and that set a wonderful tone for the rest of the story.

BBLOOOOOVE I DIE! 'definitely has a ring to it' THIS SMOOTH MOFO THO! DUDE. I CAN'T. HIM CALLING HER BELLA MARIE AND EVERYONE SENDING HIM GOOD LUCK TEXTS AND HIS LITTLE NOTES TO HER FUUUUUUU I'M HONESTLY DYING FROM THIS SWEETNESS

That was really sweet :)

Perfect proposal

Found on lemonade stand. Beautifully written have tears in my eyes. Make her yours son I think did it for me

I like the plot device of the dating of different times. I'm brand new to Fanction and am reviewing stories to help the fanfic community. FYI, my story FIFTY SHADOWS OF VENICE, is coming along, please check it out and review? I am reading stories with a Venice theme.

I love this story so much, it's so cute and romantic! Reading this story makes want to find the guy who would treat me exactly how Edward treats Bella in your story. To be honest I think I've already found him, too bad he's my best friend and he's in love with the girl I hate, while I'm hopelessly in love with him. How much more pathetic can my life get, because I know he will never see me that way.

You are really good. Geez, it was a great One Shot.

Oh my god i loved it! I think i swooned the whole way through this story! Adored this Edward, just so cute!

Great Job! xo

AW! That was so sweet! Thank you...I really enjoyed every minute reading. You really brightened my lunch hour reading time!

I loved it Pack! totes swooning! :)

Bb! I loved this one shot. Edward's devotion to Bella is so endearing. I thought it was sweet :) Every letter was adorable and caring; Edward's feelings for Bella were so palpable. So well done, Packeh. Good job and happy writing!

Lovely romantic story.