Please update soon! I have to know what happens next! :)

Please update! Love this story! :)

What did Ino say that got the kids so interested?!

Even though I don't like how you have portrayed Ino in this fic I really love Everything else! And I hope one day soon you will start updating this fic again! :)

I've been following this fic since mid 2013... Could you at least put up an update saying this won't be continued? This is literally the reason I check my followed stories list daily even though I don't use this site anymore

Please update!

I love this fic so so smuch! please upsate! :)

please! I need the next chapter NOW! I've already read it like 10 times! This is sooooo good, please don't leave it like this, I need to know what happens!

Holy shit. This is great. I hope you finish this as it's really made my day - though tomorrow is going to be shit as I've stayed up to nearly 4am to read this!

I started reading thinking "Oh yeah it'll just be a silly quick thing." I was wrong. It's sooo good. It's funny (very very funny), it's well written (some lovely descriptions and avoidance of the usual stereotypical terms used for the characters), the characters are likable (even Ino, despite her attempted rape) and some of it is genuinely touching and lovely (the way the characters interact is just so believable - it's nice they're not all dramatically shouting and screaming and arguing or being angsty all the time, they just talk and tease and bicker like normal people).

Sasuke - oh poor Sasuke - has so much understandable angst about coming out and working out his feelings. I've found myself really liking him as well as really enjoying his Sai tracking. I also love Sai's complete obliviousness to everything happening.

Naruto is adorable as is Hinata. Her backbone in this! So good! Not OOC just really good character development. I also love the little Hiashi, Neji and Hanibi scenes. They're so cute and I really love how you've written Hiashi, who most fanfic writers usually abuse. He's such an adorable dad.

Love the kids vs Ino story line, too good! I love the image of the little girls sitting around plotting to protect their Sensei.

Tenten and Ebisu, what a crackpair suddenly made into my new favorite romance ever... I ship this too hard now...

Sakura and Kakashi though... Just the most sweet pair of idiots ever. I genuinely find their interactions quite touching and sweet. Quite believable in a way too. They're like a pair of silly teenagers trying to pretend not to fancy each other but still flirting shamelessly. Kakashi is just a peach in this. Don't be down on yourself K-man, you're pretty damn sexy in this! Sakura is the right amount of stubborn, innocent and angry. I really enjoy her banter with the boys (though revealing Sasuke as gay to the girls was pretty harsh).

Loved your OC Mrs Kimchee. Every story is made better by a gossipy old lady character.

Most of all though I love the ninken. I love how the speak and their idiolect. Sakura for Alpha-bitch! I can't wait to read what they have in store for their alpha.

Oh and everything you write about Gai is absolutely genius. I have actually chortled out loud (which is hard to explain to your friends when they'd probably mercilessly tease you for reading fanfiction). I have an absolutely horrific image of him in Geisha outfit and makeup flirting his way around wiggling with those huge eyebrows fluttering his lashes.

I'm not sure when this was last updated but dear me I do hope you update again! This is literally funnier than most published books I've read!

This has been an enjoyable read with a good little plot for a post-canon story. I'd love to see more though that seems unlikely based on the last update's date. In any case, it was a good read and I would love to see the end of the whole shebang.

It#s been a while. I hope this story will have an update soon. It's one of my favorites!

I hope this fix isn't abandoned and is just on hold, especially when the story got so steamy. Plus I want to know what happened to Ino.

Just wanted to check in and reread the fic, it's one of my faves. :)

love this fic so much! hope you will continue writing this fic and update soon!

Oh my kami. NaruSasu! I'm dying. Im so happy. At first I thought it would be one sided and I was sad. NaruSasu and KakaSaku are my top OTPs.

this chapter was cool