| Reviews for My Last Breath |
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   Godric's Girl Forever chapter 21 . 10/21/2019 omg I just have to say this is absolutely amazing I am in love with this story. I hope you update ASAP because this is a work of art |
| TimeLadyJamie chapter 5 . 10/12/2019 I cried over the flashback of Jason saying "Nothing can break us" to Shelby. And then him writing Shelby and Jason 4 ever. So cute! |
| TimeLadyJamie chapter 4 . 10/12/2019 I'm liking this story so far. It's just with the way it it written it is hard to read, but we all start out somehow. I believe your writing will improve in later chapters, and don't worry, I'm still gonna read. :) |
| KH4EVR chapter 21 . 8/21/2019 uh oh! |
| Daniel6 chapter 1 . 11/3/2018 Never thought a Jason Voorhees story would make me cry. Yours did. |
| Fireballmaddie chapter 18 . 4/5/2018 I am really enjoying this story :) please do continue it, I also love your writing style |
| belfry-bug chapter 17 . 8/27/2017 Hello, Rasiel Hasu, I just wanted to drop in and say that I believe you've created quite a work of art here. I can't wait for the next installment, I'm really looking forward. I think you have a great story! The plot progression is perfect because it lets the reader savor whats happening, but doesn't drag on. Also, the dreams are a very nice touch for character developement. One thing I'd just tweek a little bit is punctuation. Your writing flows well, all it needs is a few more commas, and when characters yell/scream, be sure to put an exclamation point at the end. Other than that one thing, this story is marvelous and I can't wait to see how this tale unfolds! Until next time, -TNP |
| 666mewmew chapter 17 . 8/3/2017 i really like your story have you ever thought about doing a texas chainsaw massacre story because i have an idea for one if your intrested ? |
| I'm a random guy chapter 16 . 1/30/2016 Really good, I guess it must be hard to come up how to continue the next chapter, but I really want the next one, because this one feels like a cliffhanger for a very interesting chapter, so keep up if you can |
| Purplefairy121 chapter 16 . 12/22/2015 In later chapters can you add Freddy |
| jgh1983 chapter 15 . 11/21/2015 Awww. Very sweet at the end. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/15/2015 Love it omg please update soon |
| soulseekerX chapter 15 . 11/2/2015 Poor Jason. He's trying to approach her but he doesn't know how. I hope they will get along eventually. Update soon please I love this story! |
| Andyan chapter 1 . 10/5/2015 Love it, and I read it so quickly xD Can't wait to read more so please update it again soon! :D |
| Kihlala Sisters chapter 14 . 9/28/2015 I love your story |
