Thanks for your effort and creativity w/ this fic. I'm sure after this much time has passed, the chances of this being completed are slim to none. However, this was still an excellent read and I'm glad I took the time. If you ever do decide to finish this story, I'll be looking forward to following your work again.

Oh my! Best fanfic I've read so far and I been reading quiet a few the past few days. I love how you built everything and... PLEASE PLEASE COME BACK TO WRITE MORE? Not yelling but pleading, best story I've enjoyed so far and dying to see the end. Please do comeback and finish it?

I started reading your fan fiction yesterday and loved every bit of it. Now I just finished the last chapter and realised it was posted back in 2013. Where did you go? COME BACK AND WRITE SOME MORE! You were doing a FANTASTIC job!
While I realise life has it's distraction I encourage you to continue, this story has such potential. You can do it!

I know it's late now, but if you are still writing I hope that you will continue this fic, it's just great and awesome! So pleaseee don't adandon it 3

I'm curious to where or not the story is supposed to end after Shepard's meeting on the Presidium? I really like this story and was defiantly hoping for more. I understand if other matters are important though :)

wherever you are whoever you are please pick up your pen and finish this story! Best fanfic I've ever read!

Damned, I know it's been more than a year, but is there any chance you will continue writing this? It's really good

Did you die again?

Good story I hope you find time to update soon

Really great! Hope you keep it up.

I started reading this story about a month ago, going through roughly one chapter a day. I have to say, it's very well written. There's a good transition from Miranda as a scared, young girl, through her days in training, into what she is when Shepard is about to meet her. While I know it's been 4 months since the story was updated, I hope that you continue to write and add to this story. Definitely worth a read!

Wow good chapter i have been away for a while so I had to start over from the beginning. Keep the chapters coming.

Awesome story and I love how you fleshed out Miranda's character and made her much more human. Looking forward to seeing how the story goes?

Absolutely loving the story. The decision to really write it from the perspective of Miranda is a bold, fantastic choice. Miranda was a blank slate, and I feel like your story has really added depth and personality to her! Bravo! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

This is pretty Frickin good keep going :)