Reviews for Visions
3812458345 chapter 11 . 6/29/2019
Uh, you only turn into an Oozaru if you directly look at the full moon, not just by being in it's light. The power levels are also kind of wonky in this imo. I hope you know that Vegeta at this point should have a PL around 10,000 if not higher, he would already be able to destroy the Earth many times over and travel much faster than light.
Azure Shine chapter 9 . 6/10/2019
this is good but need bond with others more
Zuchiku chapter 17 . 3/6/2019
Nice chapter.
Vegetas bebaviour and also his view on the earthlings are so unusual from canon, even this far in the story it is still surprising me.
I forgot about Roshis ability to read minds, maybe he knows something to prevent it to. That would be interesting and it could help Vegeta against Freezas mental attacks. Just a thought .
Kitty in the Box chapter 17 . 2/28/2019
Big big big hugs to you! Oh my gosh! I can't believe I missed this. I thought for sure I have read all your DB fics and I get updated on the app. This is so incredibly exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am thoroughly amazed you are able to crank out these brilliant stories despite you having such a hectic life. I love your approach on this re-tell of Dragon Ball and Z. It is making me want to rewatch Dragon Ball again because you've written this so well.
For a while there I got so scared when you introduced Freeza who have been mentally torturing Vegeta, and I thought, oh crap, NONE OF THIS IS REAL? But then it is real, they're really on earth and that was a HUGE SIGH OF RELIEF from me.
YAY! Raditz x Lunch! yiheee~~~ I ship them so much. I love how things are starting for them.
I especially love your take on Bulma and Vegeta here. I never realized how different it felt without them bickering at each other relentlessly. I mean, sure they do but you didn't focus on that. A lot of B/V fics are all about the fights and the bickering but you put that on the background and it didn't feel distracting anymore. Yet at the same time, they're not OOC either. I love it!
Good lord, what is up Nappa's butt? Can't that jerk be happy for once? Who is the chick who flirted with him? Oooooh...curious! I really don't get why didn't he tell Vegeta about that king with the purple throne? That was important. I don't trust you, Nappa.
Wangz chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
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SaiyanPrince541 chapter 15 . 9/5/2018
I really love these early parts of Dragon Ball. They were so fun and amazing. In some ways, I find Dragon Ball, even better than DBZ. It was just so darn amazing! Even so, these guys need to progress a lot quicker. Vegeta's suffering so much, for all their sake's...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 14 . 9/4/2018
Aw man, this torture sessions are damn heart-wrenching. Frieza's such an evil, twisted bastard. I hope Vegeta murders him brutally, for all he's done and continues to do. I do think Goku should be a lot stronger than he is, given all the time he's spent with the Saiyans though.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 13 . 9/4/2018
Oh yes, I so want Raditz/Launch. That is a must! *grins*

Vegeta's definitely right about Bulma's apparent selfishness being superficial. That's why I love her character so much. Her selfish aspects are sort of humorous, but when it really comes down to it, she's deeply caring, kind-hearted and compassionate.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 11 . 9/3/2018
Hm, I would imagine that Oozaru Vegeta can best Oozaru. Goku with a flick, but that's okay.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 10 . 9/2/2018
Mah, Yamcha can be cast aside for the true Alpha male, me hopes xD.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 9 . 9/2/2018
Gotta love Goku, that little doofus xD.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 7 . 8/30/2018
Bulma should crack him in the head and he'll instantly be attracted to her like a magnet xD. Then again, she'll probably bust her knuckles doing it, so there's that lol.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 6 . 8/30/2018
Okay, I'm almost certain that I've read this before, but I can't remember when. Good thing it's updated now xD.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 5 . 8/30/2018
Vegeta's acting like a baby xD. Kinda funny considering what Canon Bulma had to go through for him to actually give a fudge lol.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 4 . 8/29/2018
Hmm, somewhat odd that Bulma would invite Vegeta to lie next to her so soon. Even so, nice and warm moments and I never get enough of some tail fluff hehe.
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