Ok it's nearly a year since the last update are you done with this or lacking ideas? Anyway no matter what you do, its still a great story. Read so many tali/SI/OC that i'm sick of them but stil a good story.

not even 3 seconds in to the story you already have a guy poking around in the ass of your character lol gross

hey its been awhile. was wandering if your on break or something.

Epic

good story so far

good story

i know what you mean, i made a man shep once just to romance tali and it was the most awful thing in history. i always wished she could get romanced by fem shep, but anyway i love your story found it today

Good chapter

Now thats how you take out a krogan...

...like a Boss!

Shepard should really retake a mako driving test

on to the next

updating is hard, but i would like to see some consistency a chapter a month at the least. Please keep it going albeit slowly is better than non at all.

good chapter.

pervert!ehehehehehe!excellent work!kudos

Why didn't Nathan just arrow the damn krogan, knowing him he'll just take it because all he see is a weak arrow unless he knows about them. He does have one that explode upon impact right?

Okay...
Nathan Loves Tali...
And your grammar went down the tubes this chapter, for whatever reason.

Loved the chapter!

This a pretty good story

your doing well

and that part Ashley made me laugh

on to the next