Well done, Harry!))))
That was very funny and hot, thank you very much for sharing!

Great and sexy. I loved every bit of it. Especially John's reactions are just cute and lovely. What a story!

Woohoo! Totally loved this! A couple of favorite bits:

/Sherlock was pressing him against the door, one hand braced beside his head and the other on his hip. He should probably do something about that, the man might get the wrong impression. In retrospect, sucking on Sherlock's bottom lip was probably not the appropriate response but it elicited such a lovely moan. . . ./

and

/ . . . "Is there anything else astoundingly obvious that you'd like to remark on?" Sherlock punctuated these words by grinding his hips against John's astoundingly obvious erection./

LOL!

~Debbie

Love it.
PS where is this cross over?

you made Harriet such a lovable presence!

wow nice one!

Ha! XD I loved this! XD oh so much, do I love this!

Funny :)

And I say thank you to you. Lovely and cute story.

So Funny

OMFG that was hot.
Sherlock fanfics are written so much better than anime fanfics. I used to think Black Butlerwas enticing- until I read Koisuru Boukun- until I read JOHNLOCK fucking fanfiction. THIS, THIS you should be proud of. :)

Haha that was great, I love how Sherlock knew all along that it was John's sister

Nice ;)

:)

Absolutely brilliant!