Adoraria saber o final dessa história.
Muito boa!

Poor Gohan.

you are one mean guy.

You did a terrific job on this fanfiction so far I have only read chapter 1 and I am hooked.

I have a problem with the line "he is the only sayian to surpass me" and " gohan is almost as strong as me" lines both said by vegeta. Ever means every sayian he knows of and no one EVER surpassed him, besides goku later explained in that same paragraph. If I am not mistaken gohan as a teen was way stronger than vegeta. I get if he ment there and in that point of the time line, but that whould not make sense because it can't be the time where they were training for the world tournament w/ videl, because goku is alive. And it can't be a long time after the buu saga because gohan is 17 in this story. So if I am wrong please correct me, gohan is the strongest character (besides vegitto) in this time period, I would make more sense if vegeta said if no FULL blooded sayian surpassed him because like I said gohan was way stronger than vegeta. and I get if you were just misinformed or if vegeta just did not want to admit a half breed was stronger. Ether way nice work even with the anime random word to discribe people thing (even though it is not random words) in a mostly english fanfic. I get if English is you're second language, it just bothers me sometimes

I personally don't like Cauli she already showed she wants to remove all that could prevent her from claiming Gohan and I knew a few girls that would do that and their selfish desire sickens me.

I believe Roshi would more than likely get kiiled on Planet Vegeta with his perverse ways lol

"The better man is the one to walk away from a fight" as the saying goes but if they attack you my motto is "They start something I will be the one to finish it" I been in more fights than I care to think about seeing as I was always the target of the 'Popular Crowd' because I helped the ones who couldn't defend themselves and those pricks always thought numbers would help them in a fight with me...They...were wrong, not trying to brag just stating facts as I have never gone looking for a trouble it goes looking for me. So those of you who cannot fight back stand your ground if you cower they will press harder but holding your ground even if you get hurt shows them you will not be pushed around and to the bully punks out there remember that small guy could have a very large friend who is more than likely standing right behind you, and on a lighter note that small guy might end up being your future boss and I promise this He/She will remember you.

You know if Gohan was more aware of how girls I think he would see how Cauli is looking at him and mentally think 'Crap' or 'this could be trouble' or even 'I have a VERY bad feeling about her...best avoid her and protect Videl'

lol your an ass

I CANT FREAKING BELIEVE THAT YOU GOT THE NAMES WRONG! HOW IN THE HELL COULD YOU?! ITS VEGETA V-E-G-E-T-A AND KAKAROT K-A-K-A-R-O-T , HOW HARD IS IT TO ACTUALLY LUCK THESE NAMES UP?

I CANT BELIEVE HOW GOOD THIS STORY IS

SOMEONE ELSE CONTINUE THIS FANFICTION IF THIS PERSON ISNT ANYBODYJAEOIJEGA

the story was beginning to be extremely interesting sucks u didnt finish it

what videl did with that guy is pretty OOC pretty sure normally she wouldnt do anything a boy