It's "fool proof" not "full proof"

Sorry if this annoyed you

I love it ! Please write more! Soon!

I really love this! Thank you for making such a,uh, lemony story!

It didn't suck and I'm glad to review!

(I honestly thought the lemon part was a little fast-paced, but other than that, it was a nice story.

I'm not gonna be to picky about this, but there's not much of a need to announce whose POV it its. You can merely just start a new paragraph and imply who's point of view it is with the first few sentences. It makes the writing look more professional.

Soul was funny at the end. That is all

Hitsukane

Nicely done! I liked the ending. It was funny!

:D MORREEEEE PLEASEEEEE I LOVE KIDXCHRONA!

Soul sees everything now a days huh? Xd

*giggle* ah soul your hilarious! Astonishing story! I love it! ＊Ｏ（）Ｏ＊

of course soul would see that happen XD

lol! Soul made me laugh

Excuse me, while I go clean up the blood from my nose an the blood that got on the floor... u I don't even support Kid x Crona, why did I love this so much then ? xD Lul, oh, the irony of life~ :3

id think it OOC crona was just a little bolder thats all u got kid spot on i like this one ;)

hehe i love this one where kid had to like make her beg for it lol anyways great story and dont worry it doesnt suck

Ignoring my review boo boo from before...

I don't think Kid and Crona are as OOC as you warn. It's just not super detailed, but not bad. The part with Soul was both naughty and amusing. Personally I like friends finding out very drastically the relationships of others.

Oh, and I enjoyed how you kept up the theme of everyone thinking they're innocent. You don't usually see that in KidCrona M fics.