Reviews for Steps
NakaylaHael chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
This was the most adorable Stames fic I have ever read in my entire life.
Eleneri chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I *loved* this. It's not something I would normally read, but it's so incredibly well-written and well-handled, and completely in James' POV and style that I absolutely had to. I love the evolution of the relationship between James and Steve; loved the commentary on being Shepard's shuttle pilot; loved everything about this visual and highly enjoyable story.

What can I say?

Like.
fireexitturnright chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Gaahhhh! That was so cute. And so well written. Everything fit so well together. I loved how it was written in a way that James might think. This just made my day. I loved it. Great job :D
kori hime chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I don't usually say this about fics found on , but this is really well-written with beautiful, spot-on characterization. It's totally a diamond in the rough. I love your Vega, and the like-no like thing. And it was a nice length for a fic. I was totally satisfied by the end. Great job. 3
S. Chensu and Luff chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Absolutely adored this story, really well written and great to read. The way you've developed their relationship is amazing, and I love the little touches you added to set up Vega's character so well.

Bonus points for the funny ending too, Shepard is hilarious!
Sly Silver chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I love this pairing. And you're not the only one who fell in love with James Vega. This fangirl was about the most pissed she'd ever been upon learning that Vega was not a romance option male or female. I love and adore him, and seeing him with Cortez is too cute. Now, I must ask... lemon anyone?
DreamersEclipse chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
You're not the only one who loves to see James and Vega bantering all cute together! I love their interaction with each other and you portrayed their personalities very well. Like really good I tell ya. Okay fangirl moment, forgive me in advance, Kyaa so cute! *sigh* Yeah sorry I couldn't help that... But your story is well written, easy to understand, and fun to read. Thank you!
aki chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
How did I miss this story? For some reason I only noticed it now.. but anyway I LOVE it! Simply amazing :)
11Dancer14 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Hi! I can't believe I missed this story but somehow I hadn't seen it till now...anyway, I love this story! Especially the way you have James' thoughts lined up, and the way you have the entire game summarized in James' head. And the whole Randy thing...that was the best! :)

'You're not allowed to be alone with him'- ok, probably one of my favorite lines in the entire story...it's sooo Vega! And Steve's response is gold and totally Steve.

Keep writing cause these two are probably my favorite couple in the entire game and no, you weren't the only one going down to that shuttle just for the bromance :)
Kestrella chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
This story: definitely *like* )

And it's now my official headcanon for all my femShep playthroughs.
actualflower chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I would normally say that I was d'awwing by the end of the story, but since it's a James story, I'll go with "it was freaking awesome."
Arpho chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I am so happy I wasn't the only one who noticed the chemistry between those two! This story has me grinning like a fool after finishing it, at 1:40 AM. Good job!
Purrrin chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
My God, this story is so perfect! You captured the characters so well, especially James, and I love the way you write about his thoughts and feelings! It's so like James to stick by his opinion once he made up his mind! Which is nice, because it means that he'll also be true so Steve in the future, right?

Love it that you wrote this story in the present tense, by the way! Makes one feel much more included in the plot and closer to the characters! And it fits the slowly built-up relationship :)

So glad you wrote the james/steve you mentioned in joking ;)
pixelatrix chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
This was awesome. I've been hoping for a story like this. I so enjoyed the bromance in the game. Please tell me you are going to write more lol.
screennameless chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
This... this is just great. There's some typos and some confusing phrases and a few other minor issues, and normally I'd nitpick, but I don't care. You nailed this. James, Cortez, everyone - spot on. I love the premise. James is such a decisive person, and I love the idea of him deciding something so abruptly and then being taken by surprise by its logical conclusion. The like/no like thing is so characteristic of James (and so is the jealousy, on a side note). And it's such a pleasure to see how well you've developed his relationship with Cortez; it feels natural and in-character to me.

So, in short: Steps - like!