Great StoryHope you'll write more!

"When that didn't work he hit the side of the viewer a couple of times" who said violence never solved anything.
I couldn't help sniggering at the line "all that time he spent searching and he found him in his living room" and "how should I know I just got here" well because you seem to know everything - and bad things have a nasty habit of following you.
"Right this is going to be a problem" why's he surprised he's dealt with Earth military before.

However I defiantly think it needs continuing there are too many unanswered questions and things that need explaining.

I love it. Charging station! Good to see Jack and the Doc wandering again.

A very promising beginning, I look forward to more.

It's a good one-shot, you could have delved more on how the Doctor had made the Wraith scared, but leaving to imagination is ok as well, I guess.

Oh, and the inner Stargate fan in me was already pointing out 'You can't recharge ZPMs! They're one use only!', but then, my inner Whovian, who is much louder, sighed and explained 'It's the Doctor, you should never say 'can't' when it comes to the Doctor, silly...'

Come on I was getting into the story and it just finished what the hell

Please continue! omg I loved it so much! I want more!

Awesome! I love Jack! :D I really hope you continue the story.

Great! Now update!

Hummm... I like it ;)

The ending was brillianly cute!