please continue this story, I really want to know what's going to happen next.

Oh, what a lovely story. Perhaps so day you will be inspired to finish?

I know you're a brit like me but just an FYI in America they call the A&E the ER. Remember George Clooney. I dont think that show would have been so popular with all the hetero females if it had been called 'The A&E' ;)

Maura should have said that it would be Pike or Popov doing the autopsy. Poor Jane would probably drop dead that the image of Pike hovering over her body.

I really hope you finish this gem of a story!

I truly hope you will finish this. Your exploration of their relationship is wonderful. This view of others about their relationship is one I have often wondered about. What do their friends and family see? Probably more than they do. The nearest we have come was the end of the episode where she killed Hoyt and everyone was there for her birthday, when Jane hugged Maura and the expressions around them said a lot. Please finish, I do struggle when reading something and finding it not complete, a half told story is always sad and incomplete. I do appreciate the time this must take you. Bless you for giving to others from your wealth of imagination and talent.

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY! I REALLY LIKE IT!

Yay! New chapter! Loved it as usual. Can't wait to see how it continues now.

What the hell just happened to Jane?!

No no no..don't leave it there!.. what's gonna happen when Jane wakes up?. I hope it just doesn't get brushed under the carpet. Maura's willing to talk about people's reactions to them. I hope Jane can do the same and open up to her. If not now..then maybe soon.. after a nightmare where Maura ends up comforting her perhaps. Not in a romantic way.. just friends still where they're willing to talk about how they feel about each other. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I forgive you. . Although I'm not quite sure what I'm forgiving you for as this is the first time I've read this chapter, so I have no comparisons to go between!.. I have to say it was great. I loved it and Amy.. it changed the whole dynamic between them. Can't wait to read more :)

The descriptive writing you're putting into this story pulls me right into it. I can picture them perfectly in my head as you've written them and their emotions beautifully. Thanks for sharing :)

I'm loving this story. Sorry my reviews have been short. I'm reviewing from my phone and with such long chapters I keep forgetting what I was going to write!... :)

Loved Maura's teasing side in this. You have their characters down perfectly. :)

This is my favourite chapter so far. I really felt for Jane as she broke down. Knowing how strong she is and reading about all the raw emotions she was feeling made my heart ache. Then Maura's actions of cradling her and later on explaining what had happened to our tough detective...just wow, I loved the emotions your descriptive writing brought out of me. From heartache at Jane's breakdown..to awwww's when Maura held her..to laughter at the free chinese food. So so good. Thanks for sharing :)