A very interesting story so far, hope you didn't abandon it, I would love to read its grand finale.

This story is amazing! I have read most OMG fanfics on this site and this is one is one of the best. The dialog, battles and background information is right on point. Sadly it hasn't been updated in years, so I guess we may never get to find out the rest of this great fanfic.

This is such a good story! I think it's one of the best OMG facfics on this site. The way Keiichi attained god status was very interesting and unique. I only hope that this story is not abandoned like so many other great OMG fanfics on this site. If it is indeed finished, I hope to see Bell and Kei reunite and get the happiness they deserved.

Thank-you for writing such an amazing fic, it is tremendously interesting and I look forward to an update.

This chapter and story in general are very well written. From the imagery, character development, the novelty of having Keiichi ascend to Godhood, add depth and sustenance to the work. I do have some predictions as to where the story my head and they are as followed:

Belldandy will get a punishment similar to Celestine recieved for trying to bring forth Ragnarok. She would be sealed in the Luner Prison.

Belldandy could return to Heaven but she could have amnesia. Instead of going by Belldandy, she could go by the name Verthandi. In Norse Mythology, the Norn of the present was refered to as Verthandi. In addition, she could have a curse similar to what Hild has in connection to the Almighty in that if Bell were to meet Keiichi again, she could die.

Keiichi would be strongly tempted to at least start a relationship with Peorth in this story. She did love him (at least that is what I got from the mangas and anime). Keiichi could lose faith that he could ever see Belldandy again. Him being stone walled by Heaven does help things in this regard.

Hild would want Keiichi and Belldandy to be together and could help Keiichi locate or get in contact with her. Hild wants her daughter to love her and she knows that Urd's sister's happiness is very important to Urd. This could help Hild win the love of Urd.

Will these predictions ever be verified or refuted? Not unless there is an update to this story. This story is my second favorite story in this series (my first being After Ragnarok). Anyways, hope you update soon and take care.

It's a wonderful story... Please update!

The next chapter PLEEEEEASE. I await Since long time.

Awesome please continue I wish they could of shown more about heaven and hell flesh out the story the big picture how the multiverse works going cosmic as TV tropes calls it

I have no words. This story is so amazing and complex. I love how many layers there are and how beautifully it is coming together. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for updating

I really can't express how beautiful your story is. You write in such a way... I can almost see your story playing through my mind yet, not in pictures or scenes, but paintings. Your words are like a garden of light.

I am impatiently waiting for the next chapter. I am liking the story very much.

a celestials or a demons true form is 12 dimensional maybe big enough to use a galaxy as a toothpick cotridictory body shape a voice that could make atoms vibrate and dissapate entire star sysyems it is the comuter yadrassil or nidhog that alow them to take those oh so beautiful human forms you could see the full electromagnetic spectrum colors invisible to the human eye the other side of the univers look into other planes from the one your in or even the flow of time itelf see multiple futers others or see all the way to the plank schale smell so powefull you can smell dna of there blood ehile it is still in their viens hear things from the other side of the planet or you could just read the vibrations in the air

now thats how you do a divine battle EPIC! i am following this update people ripping planets out of orbits and using them as bats fire attacks not ordinary fire but fire ripped from the primordial spark of the big bang awsoness. By the way i pm u a while back how come you never responded?

quick little comment. fratricide is killing your brother. the correct term would be sororicide, or killing your sister. I thought you would like to know.

JEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSUSSS on french bread this chapter!