If he fought with Tumnus he must be really old because Prince Caspian takes place 1300 years after The Lion The Witch and The Wardrobe

love this... sooooo sad at the end

Hey!i love this story lol ;) have uve read the books?cuz i was wondering if u would want to write a sequel.i know they didnt make all the books into movies cuz of the actors aging or something,but mabey u could write a sequel with the last book.*WARNING SPOILER IN NEXT SENTANCE*i was litarally crying when my friends mom told me that edmund,peter,and susan get ran over by a train while lucy and eustance are in narnia,and the all end up together again in aslans country *END SPOILER* but please please write a sequel!Mabey even the last book!

I guess the thirteen chapters are good

plz do a sequel where they meet again. plz. the ending of this one killed me since it was tragic! i loved it!

I enjoyed the story... But the ending was so sad! i wish you would make a sequel so they can be together again :)

I will not lie, I hate the ending because they parted but I have enjoyed your story! Keep writing you're really talented. I will definitively check out your other stories.

Interesting story :) It's not one of the better fics I've read though, honestly. And the ending was so sad, but it was still sweet enough :P

This almost made me cry! So sad :( but it was a great story! :D

That so sad but it was the only ending possible as you where following the movie story.

I'm sorry this story has ended but all good things come to an end -unfortunate.

NO! NO NO NO NO NO! What do you mean he left! Oh my Aslan, I think I may cry! Still, I'm not sure if I expected another ending. But I still love this story and I think it's so cute that they gave each other the necklaces and they'll never forget each other. I feel placated in that way :) x

Phew, that was a close one. I might have had a complete and utter breakdown if you killed Sam. I loved it, as usual. Can't believe it's almost over :'( And Edmund is going to have to leave! I may cry :( But I will wait with bated breath for the next chapter :) x

Cool Chapter...You Rock!

Plenty of action in the last two chapter. There. Was so much happening I had to read both chapter twice.

Good work.

Poor Ed and Sam their first argument and all because of the mist.

Sam fear she'll lose Edmund you wrote that part so well.

Please update soon.