| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Mistress of Death |
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hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 7/17/2016 different |
Ash the DragonGuardian chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 I really like this! It is sad but having him choose between his friends, being normal or coming to his lover in a body of his best mate. I love that! I wouldn't mind being your beta, it give me more things to do since school is happening soon. Still... I would like it if you had more storys like this. |
Review 2 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Sorry you deserve a better review. Eh hem. Te idea was original and interesting. You were good at describing his pain. But the Death part was a bit weird. His desire to help Tonks was quality. But in Ron's body? Erm but weird and rushed. It was just sudden ending and basically if you added some more detail it would be much better. It's good but more like a rough draft than a final copy. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Okay. Um. Bit rushed. Good idea. Yeah. |
voidblade6 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 OH ... i FEEL bad for harry I mean hes stuck in the weasels body...;p |
Doctor Dandy chapter 1 . 10/19/2012 It was... acceptable until the end. The end is what killed it. - Thorndsword |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012 I like it but now I feel sorry for Hermione and the Weasleys, especially Ron. They lose Ron and Harry to death, only for Harry to return from death in RON'S body because Harrys old body is too mangled and mutilated for him to return to so Death chose the nearest non-mangled body to dump him into. So the Weasleys can't bury Ron now with Harry now in control of, (though unless they love Harry as much as they loved and don't mind that Harry 'borrowed' Rons body, I'm surprised the Weasley clan aren't more mad over the loss of Rons body. I mean who's name is Harry going to be buried under when he dies, and/or the Weasleys going to pay for an empty casket and bury it under Rons name in the family graveyard?) and now Hermione is going to have to watch the body of HER boyfriend get together with Tonks because Harry is now in it, unless Harry is going to find a spell that PERMANENTLY changes Rons body to make it resemble HIM more unless Rons body starts changing to look more like Harry on its own since the eye color already changed when he took over. *lol* |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 4/13/2012 Good story and I'm sure that was strange for everyone involved. Thanks for sharing! |
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 Ron always wanted everything that Harry had and Harry always wanted what Ron had...I guess this way the both get what they wanted, just not in the way they wanted. How will Harry be able to access Potter vaults when he now does not carry Potter blood? |
Matt chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 Bottom Line. If you publish another chapter, I would like to read it. It's pretty short but I enjoyed the concept and the writing is decent. |
WA WA West chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 As soon as it said he was in Rons body that killed this little one shot hopefully stays a one shot |