Damn you Enobaria! Learn your place

Dam you Enobaria

Way to ruin the moment ... Enobaria!

Damn! Way to ruin the mood, Enobaria!

I myself, would be mortified, if my teacher walked in on me, having sex - sorry almost - with a guy. My teacher would be too,a nd it'd just be very awkward.

It's awkward no matter, who it is.

Um. So this is amazing. Like its so well written. And oh my. This is just 100% perfect. I don't know if this is finished but omg I'm sure everyone would agree that you would be 177483748293802926% more of a god sent if you wrote more. Again this is perf. And I was reading the other reviews and all of the parts where I think they're saying "fucking" there is like *** these things like what? Are we not allowed to say fuck? Fuck. Fuck fuck fuck fuck. Fucking fuck mc fucker fucking fuck fuck. Idk.

please review

That was awkward... Haha, still great :D

such a sweet story with such a tragic ending :( but never the less amazing!

hot!

So smutty... but I like it like that!

That was sort of cute :)

well, it's weird to call it like that but it is actually :)

You're good at writing, do more :)

Nelly x

Could you write a Clato smut fic where they're Enorbaria leaves or something, but perhaps hoe instead of fucking they actually make love..or both or whatever you want...just wondering Love the way you wrote ths btw! I constantly find myself reading it xD
Marina

She licked his wound? That was the only part I didn't buy. The rest way... interesting. Good, really.

It was getting really hot and I was getting uncomfortable. And then Enobaria arrives and I had the urge to laugh. And then I sobbed in the end. AMAZING, :O

Keep writing