La verdad me caen mal todos en esta historia, Kagome por no valorarse, cuando una mujer ama se vuelve incoherente pero creo que ante todo en el fondo saben que no están bien con un hombre infiel y recapacitan, ella están ciega y tonta que da coraje, ella no merece al Sesshomaru de esta historia, ella merece estar donde esta porque así lo decidió, Sesshomaru cae mal desde que no lucha por lo que quiere, en la guerra y en el amor todo se vale, cuando supo que el hijo iba a ser suyo debió decirlo, no tanto por quedarse con Kagome, si no por regir como padre de su hijo, si Inuyasha amaba a Kagome debió perdonarla al final que el hijo no fuera suyo como ella perdonaba todas sus infidelidades ¿no?, Inutaisho es un padre negligente, sabe que su nieto es hijo de su heredero y aún así no hace nada, sabe que su hijo menor le es infiel a su compañera y aún así no hace nada, no hace nada de nada. Total todos merecen su sufrimiento y las parejas debieron quedar así y Sesshomaru debió terminar con alguien que siempre lo eligió a él primero, fin.

Eu amei a historia demais porem so teve uma coisa que me desagradou tambem por demais...
Foi o casamento da kagome e do inuyasha ter demorado demais pra acabar
Ela tinha que ter descoberto logo a traicao pra o meu casal favorito se juntar mais rapido hahahahaha

I really love your story. So much I cant stop reading it.

It's a great story but it is a bit rough around the edges as you know a person with dignity could not handle so much humiliation. You watched the anime or read the manga so you should know how much strong character Kagome possed. Nobody with a self respect could endure so much. Try to write fanfiction where Kagome is Kagome not some whining bitch who can only cry. I am writing what i think about itbest of luck fr more writing in future.

I absolutely loved this wonderful story and cannot wait to see what else I can find of yours! One of my favorite songs has been transformed into on of my favorite ships! Thank you!

WWWWOOOWWWW! This story is so awsome!

I like your story. It's really good. However, your making Kagome seem like a two-timer. I can read angst but it doesn't mean I have to like it. I have known the feeling of being cheated, having a bf dating you while with another girl. And it's not the least bit funny, in fact it hurts like razors on fire in my chest. However, keep up the good work! Hopefully it's not all angsty I can't stand the sad parts lol

This was great

I know this is already complete, but I can't resist this review:

Why aren't Touga and Sesshomaru telling Kagome about Inuyasha's cheating?! If they had real respect for her, they would. I just needed to get that out... Now, I'm going on to read... what is it? 5 more chapters?

Cheers,

Stardust Miko

That was reeaaalllyyyyy gooooooodddddd keep up the great work
Sakura Tenvaiga

loved it. there were parts ware I hated you but then I loved you agen. lol

I liked the story, it was good

I am glad they are happy. I think this is a good first(?) long(?) story. I think you will get better with practice. Maybe try more descriptions, like of the surroundings. I also think you might want to develop your characters a little more fully, sometimes they were a bit 2D. Of course I expect a lot more than many readers, and this is just , where most people aren't looking for super high quality. No offense intended to any author! Just, it's more about reading their favorite characters, you know? Anyway, good luck writing, and have fun with it! :DDD

Why are they all letting Inuyasha do as he pleases? If I were Kagome, I would leave them all. Then again, if I were Kagome, none of this shit would be tolerated for a hot second.

Karl Urban is the hottest in LOTR guuuurl