Yeah I liked it a lot

16. Chapter 6.
then ALIEN CRAEATURES Mauled to death hardest then lost a lot of blood with three with bst friends bitten Paul Henry Lahote then began blood biding to him then then suddenly was With alien venom then then to best friends the three to Kids and toddlers the marked me as well then then suddenly CLAIRE ATREYU Bitten then blood binding as my godchildren prayed the great creator to make them as Immortal children then to aliens/Vulcans then suddenly too late came who turned you tell us/they we found you guilty take them out then With the five then then screaming the for your punishment we sentenced you to be killed then both then bot sliced were lost then then Forbidden to mate torn taken from us/they then the five with the Cullens were next good Screaming the as all of it then torn from here head/ bodies then was sickest but Nothingness was left brought there then experimented was too late was Not human as they think of me then suddenly Aro they are not guilty they are good people rid of her/others were with these ones then Screams of her and other then experimented as all heads then More as all of them more Volturi guards good With them bitten to as all of it the one was consorted by him/they are drained blew up then too late Atomized but vaporized good with them gone then too late was a lot of pain the venom was mutating us/they then Blown freely the both then vanished we report she revealed by total exposure but is dead wit the very four to more around the world it really happened the bodies both the biggest but largest lost blood as all of it Alice who done to her/him/they Volturi too late us/they/four thousands were Immortal as all of it more ,medical/milltary /beauty oiled/massaged /lotioned but lathered but Aloe vera/Vapor rubbed then scented oils to more wholliest as all of it then More of it for couples then to us both then emotionlessly drained was more Serene in peace and calmer then suddenly on my finger a Vulcan engagement ring became his fiancée nuked freely shattering then but to around the world's then lost more than as all of blood then too late shattered but never returned to more remains good never then it came too late it was too late good more of it then lost as all of it Mother this rich ring oh my god it's Vulcan yes asked her to marry me good grief from help in time was his mate for life holy moses Whoa Nellie she is his mate gasp a Vulcan marriage hey boys newsflash they been dating for a month um Charlie Sue Will you Isabella Marie Swan daughter of Renee Dwyer and two husbands will you please for the goddess of Betazed marry me imzadi YES! tears fell from her Then suddenly kissed by leaning down harder then too late it was set no longer a single girl but a engaged woman so both they then were engaged then Pierced freely popped freely brought there good then lost as all of blood then they were bitten by snakes made her telepathic with him with they to around the world's youth as all to remains we forbidden it then rid of them then Blew up then too late hey boys he's taken crap look we ae what something in the back in my brain it's voice from you it was too late tested for telepathy Renee your daughter is activated is Telepathic found herself a imzadi her eyes are in fact Black irises with bangs cut looks like Deanna Troi oh my god she's what say to your mate tried something galactic my mouth did not move anymore at all it said: Do you Remember we first met Do you remember What I Taught you Imzadi Can you Still sense my own Thoughts at All K'diwa gasp born with Teenaged Ocampan ears are pointed upswept eyebrows are rich Sch'n T'Gai slanted eyebrows what onto you robes she is what Vulcan she is not human anymore Momma mia Sir! she is what mated for life bonded to me is my bondmate first yoo hoo it's Edward going to strike the gong then suddenly screaming out a alien challenge was Kail'-fi-'flieeee! in Vulcan dialects and tongues as the dawn of our days for as all of our tomorrows as from the time of the beginning it is today it is now I Shall make my choice This One! coldly pointed at the actor played Captain James T Kirk of the new movie as Champion in Vulcan robes of marriage looked like from the planet Vulcan Momma mia madam oh no Captain! she declares the Koont'ut'fi'fliee looks like Who T'Pring the actor paled of the name then he called yikes Bells they are from California good god man the world did evolve.

Very well written. I am enjoying it.

Your last chapter sucks!

Renee is a bitch and completely stifling her

Loved this story, you did a great job!

Oh well crap it's disappointing that things with Charlie and Bella never really worked out but I have to say it's Charlie's fault it's the way it is. I agree with Bella about her dad cause she did try and that was a big no no to her heart. I'm very DISAPPOINTED in you Charlie Swan.

Oh ouch I just had to leave a review for this chapter...Bella sweety you need to talk to your dad about your insecurities and doubts because man are oblivious a lot of the time...especially towards woman's silent treatments

I want to slap those two... I don't get how Bella has so much patience ;_;

Great story!

I loved it, it was very unique. I am sad that Charlie more or less wrote her off when he remarried but you can't have everything, I wonder tho if they both imprinted on her why not let her have both...

So I know that her parents are supporting her financially and so they can have a say about where she lives. But first she is 18, so if Charlie wanted to Leo her there Renee could not do anything.
Also you mentioned that Sam knew Washington's laws and therefore knew he couldn't prevent it. Again, she is 18 if the pack was to support her financially given she is a imprint Renee again could throw a fit as much as she wants.
I dint like Renee. I don't think only because a parent supports you which is their obligation up until a certain age, gives them the right to be a dictator. Because she is behaving exactly like that. She played basketball, big fucking deal. It's her life not Renee 's, so if she wants to risk it it's her decision. I will admit that it sucks to go MIA without notice on your mother, but that was her only mistake and even that doesn't give Renee the right to speak to her like she is her slave and not her daughter. The fact that Bella doesn't speak up for herself makes start to dislike her too. I'm still curious were you are going with this though.

So I know that her parents are supporting her financially and so they can have a say about where she lives. But first she is 18, so if Charlie wanted to Leo her there Renee could not do anything.
Also you mentioned that Sam knew Washington's laws and therefore knew he couldn't prevent it. Again, she is 18 if the pack was to support her financially given she is a imprint Renee again could throw a fit as much as she wants.
I dint like Renee. I don't think only because a parent supports you which is their obligation up until a certain age, gives them the right to be a dictator. Because she is behaving exactly like that. She played basketball, big fucking deal. It's her life not Renee 's, so if she wants to risk it it's her decision. I will admit that it sucks to go MIA without notice on your mother, but that was her only mistake and even that doesn't give Renee the right to speak to her like she is her slave and not her daughter. The fact that Bella doesn't speak up for herself makes start to dislike her too. I'm still curious were you are going with this though.

Great story

ty I really enjoyed this story, well written and kept my attention.