Is there going to be another update soon o3o I haven't read this story in awhile so I was wondering if there was going to be one.

Wow, very interesting read. Good action. I enjoyed that last bit about the Brotherhood's priorities needing to be changed (according to Carmen) and Sarah's rebuttal.

This isn't important. Didnt ruin the story any. So you can tell me to shut up if you wish:

They looked up just in time for the barrel of an Assault Rifle to kiss the skin right between Sarah's eyes.

"Hey there!" Carmen said jovially, the Railway Rifle firing with a dull thumping sound before the Talon had time to say anything...

So Sarah got smacked in the face with an assault rifle. But that fact seemed to get ignored afterwards. Like it never happened. Again, besides that little issue that wasn't important, great chapter! :D

I actually forgot about this story for a long time, which makes me so much happier. This story really has a lot of potential so hopefully it can pick up again now.

Great job as always buddy can't wait for more.

I don't know if you still check this but I'm 5 chapters deep and it'd real good. I'm a big fan of original characters don't get me wrong I'm all about dome lone wander. As I said just started I see their twenty five chapters I hope you wrapped it up

That ended up being really good. I was at first disappointed at who Sarah's owner turned out to be. But his character in my opinion has a lot of potential. The merc, a character part of an original group not existing in the FO universe? I didn't see their name when I googled them just for fun... Anyway, what she up to? Is their a big price on Ray's head from the Talon Company she knows abt and wishes to claim? *shrugs shoulders*

Well regardless, a potential means of escape for our heroes. Although I don't remember who the man with scars is?

Freakin love this shit your words are butter and my mind is a biscuit whats a biscuit with out butter some boring as piece of bread

For the past few days I've been reading this story. I really enjoy the general plot point of taking down Talon Company, how you took advantage of vagity amongst characters such as Jabsco and stayed away from the Lone Wanderer and most main characters and how great your original characters are. That being said, I disliked how it seems to be straying towards more romantic which I hate as it seems to be frequent on this site an really in a world where everything is trying to kill you, who has time for that? Regardless, this by far the best fan fiction story ive read on this site thus far, I can't wait to read the next chapters, really great work!

Great job buddy this chapter was very good with the mention of taking down talon company. I can't wait for more.

Ray and Sarah... I ship that mate

DO A BARREL ROLL!

#Crowly's a douche

THE BEST CAT FIGHT EVER!

Lone Wanderer? Maybe...but who's Alison? Lol! Where'd the crossbow come from? Is it in the DLC or your own original? Cuz I want one!
I loved this chapter, nice cliffhanger ending to it as well. Very well done! :)

No worries on FtV, the Halloween special. Halloween is over, but I still look forward to reading about Alex and Clover's holiday...

Hello I just got done wirth 24 of waste land survival. ... I really like how you have done this. ... I really hope you can get some more chapters. ... when is Ray going to lvl up lolz ty soooooooooo much

Great job buddy I can't wait to see what happens to Lyons next.