| Reviews for Wildwest |
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A-Swedish-Tent chapter 2 . 7/29/2012 Good job this is a great fic, love the way your writing kind of brings the story together and that it is related to the series but twisted in a western way, really nicely done :D keep it up, would love to read the next chapter :D |
Magpie1600 chapter 2 . 5/8/2012 I love it, I absolutely love it. Can't wait for more. |
simplyn2deep chapter 2 . 5/8/2012 oh so so very good! it has got to be a challenge to make the dialogue time period compliant and I give you kudos you for that! Can't wait for chapter 3! |
francis2 chapter 2 . 5/8/2012 It's interesting how you translate the story into the wild west and how you add a love story too. |
Sue chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 This is a great idea for a story. I like it. I just want to mention that you are using the words shoot and shot wrong. The word fallow should be follow. A Beta could help you with that. |
francis2 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 I really like this AU. No cellphones, and Camaro and Silverado are horses. Who'd have thunk? |
Lidil chapter 1 . 4/14/2012 Wild and wonderful concept. Look forward to reading more. |
Creed757 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 This is a great start, and I'd love to see more! Keep 'em coming please |
Azteka chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 Now that you have mentioned it. You're right no one has done a "western" themed Hawaii Five-0. There are plenty of futuristic version of the series. I really love this, and I hope to see more of this piece. Azteka |
nightstalker63 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 this story was awesome cant wait for you to write more |
sprenger chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 I liked it, thought it was an interesting take on the story. Plus danny and steve make great cowboys. I hope you continue this. |
Sue chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 Love the idea of them in a Western. It is so different from other stories. I want to mention that you are using the words shot and shoot wrong. It seems that you are using them backwards. Using shot when it should be shoot, etc. Also you are using fallow instead of follow. A beta could take care of this for you. |
Magpie1600 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 Oh God this is good. It is so good. A perfect mixture. Can't wait for more. |
monaha12 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012 Great start! Love this a lot. Them riding in the saddle together was cute. I like how you tranlated a lot of scenes from the pilot in to the western version. Looking forward to more. (note: to go after somebody is follow, not fallow.) |
AussieJo chapter 1 . 4/4/2012 "Claps hands" Brilliant! I love the western stories with our boys in. :) |