I loved it . had only 1 spelling error

I'm like, fighting back fangirl squeals right now. FAVES!

This was so awesome! I have a soft spot for absolutely mind-blowing sweet cute stories! .

I really thought this was a beautiful piece. You really understood the character of Vegeta and what his inner workings could be like. I'm glad I stumbled across this piece and will look for more of your work :)

Oh and somewhere midway through I believe you meant thread instead of threat. Other than that - great grammar. Not easy to do!

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Awe! So cute!

Very nice and very descibtive not to mention utter cuteness :) LOL I found it exceptional! Keep it up.

Omg this one shot was nicely written and adorable. :DD You're really good at this and you should definitely write more one shots. XD And yes! Include how Vegeta slowly fell in love with Bulma, that would be amazing. :)) Continue the good work. :3

Aw I love it! Very sweet story _