*tugs hair* You!... you left it here... how could you?!

This was a nice story though I wish it had more scenes between the doctor and master.

A really good second chapter, is it me or does the description of the general sound a bit like Sherlock from BBC?

multiples of five? atlantis complex eh?

anyways. thanks for writing this! it was a pretty nice, although brief read. if i have any qualms, it'd probably be that the descriptions and prose were a little choppy and robotic here and there, but overall, a pretty strong plotline and presentation.

Loved it hun! I wouldn't mind seeing more doctor/master loving if you continue this story! I throughly enjoyed it :D xx

Woooo that was brilliant! Though I am sad it's over :(( but can't wait for the sequel! Xxx

Awesome! Really great to have another insight into Koschei's past! X

B-But you said you would upload 2 chapters this time! *Sobs and breaks down* I neeed the next one, I wanna know who he picks, im hoping for a jealous!Doctor.. Bad computer! Goodluck on your tests.

Wow. This story nearly made me cry. You're doing such a great job! Especially with The Master. I imagine that it would be difficult to take a character like him and make him cry and feel terror and guilt without the scenes being forced or overly exagerrated and angsty, but you do it wonderfully! I feel so sorry for him; it reminds me of "A Clockwork Orange". And your little plot twists are driving me nuts! Martha and The Master! And The Doctor being responsible for the drums! I can't wait to see what you're going to write next. SO POST THE NEXT TWO CHAPTERS! YOU WILL OBEY ME! ...please...?

Hehe Ioved it! Poor master, so he likes Martha now... Oh and the doctors back! Interesting... Update soon! Xx

PLEASE POST THE NEXT TWO CHAPTERS. I WORSHIP THIS STORY. PLEASE! XD. I wanna see wut the doctors reaction to this would be if the master loves martha now and not him! Muhaha I am evil! xx

Fantastical! (is that a word?) I loved Martha loads this chapter update soon yeah?

Loved it and ARG all those questions at the end, my head is swimming! I need moreeeeee! I want to know all those answers xDD xx

More more more :)

I wonder if the master will not only be angry but not want to be near the doctor? xD loved the update hun, I can't wait to see what happens next. Oooh I need the next update .