The Mein Kamph bit caught me off-guard.
My sides are on orbit lmfao

This deserves a sequel

And the last we saw of canon FP was her rapping...

5 years since this was dated...seems like forever ago. kind of like a time capsule

Mathematical! hope u make a sequel of how finn finds out he been doop. and perhaps let ice king kidnap PB. hopefully billy still has his stones

welp. ready the bunker. Princess Yandere has arrived.

I love and hate the ending because Finn had to destroy his work for the last 10-11 chapters in a single moment and that PB was being a little too Chaotically Good... But at least Finn and FP got together which leaves me with this bittersweet feeling

I don't watch Adventure Time much, except for episodes like the one between Flame Princess and Finn. I'll be honest, I'm pissed off, very pissed off in fact. We have a fanfiction of a possibility of a good ending, and we end up with what? A compromise, where Finn pines for Flame Princess, but is working under the lie that Bubblegum gave him. Where Finn, under the lie, destroys the stones he had sought out for them to be together. I'll be honest, I feel like inserting myself into the fanfic, and killing Bubblegum. Harsh, but honest. She is a spoiled brat, nothing more. Let her burn, and her Kingdom rot under the scorching flames. She better pray Finn doesn't find out the truth or her kingdom is as good as dead.
Aside from that however, the fanfic was brilliantly made, and I enjoyed it. My only major issue, was the ending, which didn't sit well with me, at all, as observed by the giant rant above. I give this a 8/10. It just felt like it raised my hopes, only to crash and burn them in a single chapter.

Anyone know what happened to SCIK2012? All of her fanfics Are not appearing anymore.

I loved this story

Wow... great story! I really liked the way you put in the show's humor and expressions.

holy fudge! this is some awesome fic! love still prevail in the end.. and im sure Fin will find another way to be enternally happy with flame princess!

Willow stumbles in, his hair a mess clothes ruffled, looking dazed with a big goofy smile on his face.

"I loved this. It took my heart. And beat it near to death. And I walked away smiling.
Also I'm sorry but the song Fire Woman goes so well with this it's amazing.
I can't deal with these emotions, man. I just. Wow. 10/10 would read again."

Then he stumbles out the door.

"LISTEN TO FIRE WOMAN BY CRUSH 40" he calls over his shoulder, then disappears around the corner.

You'll probably be seeing him again.

I thought this was book 1 and you were going to write a sequel?