Reviews for Insanity Shield: Part One of the Insanity Shield Saga
ShadAmy1Fan - Shylah McVey chapter 14 . 5/21/2018
Wow. This was such a good story! You pulled off the resurrection of mephiles really well, something i can’t say for any other story ive read with that plot. I loved your character development, and even though Shadow disappeared at the end, the silver/blaze thing was enough to make me satiated.

I also really liked how you intertwined the game-verse with the archie-verse. The story was concise, thrilling, moved at a great pace, and i can’t actually name all the great things about it because I’m terrible with words lol

But just know i loved it and you are a great writer. Thanks for writing!
Mademoiselle le Chat chapter 14 . 2/17/2016
Well, I've read the second part before reading the first and now it makes more sense to me. However, this was amazing too. I just love the way you describe everything. I can't wait for what's next.
Kiss!
strato-abyss17 chapter 14 . 10/7/2014
Hahaha! This thing is INTENSE! I can't wait to read the next part! This is definitely better than the Sonic fanfics I wrote in the past. Great work.
Strato Abyss signing out.
Ray chapter 14 . 9/9/2014
This was reallyyy good! Though, this couldn't possibly be the end- Silver and Blaze are just now making entrance saying Shadz is still alive!
But anyway, I look forward to more of your writings!
Ray chapter 14 . 9/8/2014
omg please continue! You left us off at a cliffhanger! No fair!
Jimmythereptile chapter 14 . 9/4/2014
Awesome story,I'm glad that you finished it :)
Are you planning a sequel or at least a one-shot where Shadow returns to Rouge?
Dyrk Prowler chapter 14 . 9/4/2014
I like silver lining positive spin in this bit.
You've given hope which is good so the story can end with some optimism.
I liked how you conveyed Rouge's sadness I felt for her. I reckon the length of this chapter is good for an epilogue, it was to the point and wrapped things up nicely.
I really enjoyed this story overall, thank you for a good read and I hope my reviews help.
Looking forward to more.
Dyrk Prowler chapter 13 . 9/4/2014
I enjoyed this chapter lots, after a quick reread of the story of course.
I didn't pick up on any errors so well done. I felt this chapter flowed well and was appropriately climactic.
The ending in my opinion was sad and a bit touching. It left me with a somewhat hollow feeling so I cared about what happened so you engaged me as a reader which is good.
My only complaint would really be that this chapter was a tad on the short side.
Overall I enjoyed this very much.
ShinyShiny9 chapter 12 . 1/31/2014
Awww, sweet chapter. Poor Shads, he has so much trouble letting himself love, and on top of that everyone's going to be getting under his skin about it now. :P
Just a quick note though, where it says "I believe her and Tails are working" it should be "she and Tails." There's an awesome trick for it: wherever you use a pronoun and noun, think of what you would use if the noun wasn't there. So, when saying "We/us and the girls are going to the movies," you would say "We are going to the movies," not "Us are going to the movies." And you would say "I believe she is working," so "She and Tails" would also be correct. Just a tip! :)
Dyrk Prowler chapter 12 . 1/31/2014
Awesome update!
I'm officially completely hooked to this story!
ABCSKW123-IX chapter 11 . 1/29/2014
Wow!
This is well-written, riveting-all that stuff they say in book reviews!
Eggman's insanity-except it isn't him at all. A great twist.
ShinyShiny9 chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
Woo! This is amazing! You really strike a great balance between the action and emotion, and the plot moves along really well without too much exposition or aimless running around, but without too heavy an emphasis on battle scenes either. Characters are in-character, spelling and grammar are flawless, and I love how you intertwined the games and the "Universe" comics. Nice!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/26/2014
This... Is... So... AMAZING! Please update!
Dyrk Prowler chapter 10 . 1/27/2014
I'm intrigued. Look forward to more.
Great Work.
alwaysdoubted chapter 9 . 1/26/2014
This story has me on the edge of my seat. Great story you have here
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