this story is good so far you should write more

Awwww, so sweet, and so in character! I can see Rich having that fantasy! ;) You know what it reminds me of? That song from Mulan "A Girl Worth Fighting For", especially the part where she in her male persona was talking about "a girl with brains not afraid to speak her mind" and the other solders gave her filthy looks, LOL. :D

Wonderful!