Haha, I wonder what kid of reward would be great enough for a giant to join the gods.

1. Did Jason cause the wind that picked Persia up?
2. If Apollo could catch Persia, why couldn't he catch Percy? Persia probably fell for a shorter period as she was closer to the ground, but everyone just gave up on saving Percy, because he, quote on quote, "couldn't be saved".

1. Why is Percy so angry all of a sudden? She's probably said way more things about him before.
2. Why did Leo think that Persia was talking about Jason when she clearly didn't mention his name?
3. Kinda confused about the wording for the last few lines.
4. Does Persia have some kind of all-seeing crystal ball? Because I sure as fell don't think she has some kind of magic eye that lets her see everything that's happening around the world. Otherwise, she wouldn't know that Hazel liked Leo.

Most hilarious ending I've seen in ages

XD

This sucks waste of time for me

Kabam get fucked!

XD Rachel yes

I don't love the hunt's reaction but you screwed nothing up. Their decision is perfectly reasonable and it should be good for the rest of the story.

I had my suspicions from the start but the realization that Artemis somehow had a daughter and then killed her, just wow.

the ending is funny

I like this, but I feel that Artemis's ending was somewhat unrealistic. As the Hunt already forgave her (for whatever reason, probably the fact that Persia is not actually dead) she could have easily rededicated herself to it, thus regaining her immortality (and securing some for Percy). Failing that, it's known that Zeus shows favoritism toward her, and I'm surprised that HE wouldn't then make her a goddess again. I like the story, but the ending did feel slightly god. If you REALLY want her to stay mortal, you should say that the spell "permanently drained her immortal essence" or some such thing. Also, I'm kind of surprised that the other Olympians just let what happened to Artemis go. I would have thought that they would be out for blood against someone who dares mess with their immortality.
I do like the story, and I thank you for putting in the time and effort to complete it, unlike most writers on this site. And the ending with Rachel was really funny.

Thanks,
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What the? You've exploded all 5 of the HoO pairings. What even?!

Not that I'm against it, and Lazel doesn't get enough attention in my opinion. If only you had included Perlia, I would have been completely happy.

Hi, I loved the story! It was pretty good. I liked how you broke up Percy and Annabeth, it was mutual, and calm. There was no cheating, nothing violent, and I think that's how it would be if it actually did happen. I think you did a great job overall. It was similar to other stories, but it was different, all in all a great story. :)

Why not make Percy immortal so they can live forever ?instead of them having to grow old and die. :( but other wise I loved it.