About time a new chapter came out, short or not. But it was ok and basically set up that warfang is lost(atleast for now) make the new one soon)

Nice chapter. A bit shirt and there were a few grammatical errors, but I'm just happy to see you writing again. It seems that our heroes will have a lot on their plate since they just lost Warfang. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

finish the story bro i kinda want to see it end so please finish it

has pelko got anything to do with pewdiepie?

alright bro i like the story it is funny and what not but it would be awsome if you can continue the story because it just makes me wonder what is going on in pelko's head there is something not right with him even for a physcopath (hope i speeled corectly) any way keep it up

You know when you have made a great story when so many people recognize you..

Of course I mean Native avenger, but that's because I was just re-reading... The entire thing..

But that's just something I have to do when i am making a comic about it, maybe someday your's too could be a comic, a lower budget looking one because... Well the one in higher detail.. Haha. De-tail.

*Ahem* This one in higher detail is going to take a .. I'd guess more than a year...

Also have no idea why I am saying this to you, I suppose it's just in case you wanted to know. Ba...Buh...boo..

BYE!

i read this story back a while ago i hope you update it soon i like it wish the chapters were longer though :P

Uh oh even through flint lock ruffles ain't very advanced they are stills better than no gun and in the hand of the dark army well good chapter, but how got they this nearr to the city whitout Bering noticed, even in the night, well done

I was afraid and thinking that you had quit fanfiction, and this chapter has proven that thought false. Ive got some pokemon OC's if you ever thinking of doing a pokemon story or crossover (i actually have one that is more than an OC.)

Glad to see that this story hasn't been abandoned. I'm not surprised that Pelko acted the way he did, something is obviously wrong with his brain. I also find it very interesting that the apes are using firearms now. I wonder what will happen next.

YOU'RE FINALLY BACK. AND THE CRAZY BASTARD GOT MORE CRAZY! Anyway I got to see what happens soon.

you're not gonna probably read this but if you do I read your story twice and I really like it I would really love it if you could maybe updated soon

pelko seems like pewdiepie because of his hatred for barrels

Lol... Pelko from Natives story... He still hates barrels... And does he have teret syndrome? Lol
...BARRELS...

I'm sorry but I just had to stop reading once I got to chapter five. No military in their right mind would let someone who has no battle experience lead into battle. And just because he knew about ww2 dose not mean he fought in it. Also, what is with the cheatas? No body in the military would take orders from a civilian, they are to be protected. Not relied upon. Again I'm sorry about the criticism, but when it come to the military I don't mess around because I'm going to be signing my papers within a year.