MY HEART!

Awww..
That was adorable and just woahh.
Your character development was very good! I loved cute Ven and Dominant Roxas. Hehe. Good job!

More I love VeRoku together . plz contiune

RokuVen needs more love! Who doesn't like RokuVen? It's like twincest...but 10 TIMES better! :3

Could you make a sequel to this. Maybe like a a few years later, there still dating and Roxas wants to propose to Venny, but doesn't know how, until he sees some movie starting with romantic dinner, to their first time s-e-x, and then the proposal. And that's how it's gonna get down. And Venny doesn't need to make love with Roxas to accept his love. If you could make this a story, then THANK YOU! I wish could write it my self, but I can't have an account. Keep on writing!

Very nice :P if there were to be an update/sequel, I'd suggest how namine ties into this, possibly becoming a threeway RokuNamiVen, but that's just my opinion. Really good work though.

Oh WOW Ni-chan! I've been reading your 90 days story and it's amazing! And then I decided to read one of your others-not even knowing this was a RokuVen story until I kept going and wow! It's so funny because I didn't read your author's note before I began reading-in case you wrote there's smut and of course I wouldn't want to know that until I finished it- so I had no idea that this was even a RokuVen story. I just thought this was a story about Vanitas going to confess to Ventus. And then Roxas passes by Ventus and I was like, you know, their kind of a cool pairing, maybe I should look them up after reading this and then it gets all smexy and I'm like... "Whoa, this is the pairing? Freaking awesome!"

I love that you went a different route because I love these two. Great story and just amazing way to end my night!

P.S. I always liked the cover art for KH. And yes, they do make them look freaking older than they are! When I first saw Roxas on the cover of KH2 I thought they were adding some new 20 year old or something. Ah, but you got to love the in game models 3 :D

-youngwriter123

Wow, I dont even like this pairing but since u write it i loveeeeeed it! That kiss scene was awesome. Now you are my fav author. Keep the good work

You are right. This pairing needs more love, just like VaniRoku and hnnngh, I loved this so much. 3

I adore the personalities you gave to the two, I can easily picture this in my head. Roxas being the seme, just as he should be. B] And Ventus being the adorable little kid he is.

I hope you write more one-shots or stories about this pair, I love your writing style and I am extremely jealous~ xD

Sorry for my sucky review. ;_;

Oh my gosh the smexy fluff! Yet another brilliant story that is definitely getting the 'fav' treatement. I'm seriously in awe how well you can switch different pairings so well and make it work so wonderfully. It took me a moment to remind myself that I was reading something that wasn't VanitasxVentus, but after I got over that, boy did I fall hard. Kinda like how Ventus did for Roxas upon receiving such a hot kiss, and adorable confession. I'd totally be swayed by that if I were Ven. XD I love how more confident Roxas is and how he takes control of everything, and how meek and adorable Ven is, thinking he could pass as Namine's sister. It's small things like that that I tend to pick out and appreciate a lot. It makes it easier for me to imagine what's going on more, picturing things like the hallway and Namine and Roxas talking, and how she's holding her sketchbook and how Roxas and dressed and standing. Stuff like that. Now I may seem like I'm ramling, and I sort of am, so here's hoping you understand my random thought process.

But all you really need to understand is that I love this oneshot, as I already knew I would before I even started to read it. So great job as usual, taking your talents and writing this wondeful pairing. And all the best as always, on future works. Take your time and have fun!

First time reading a RokuVen fic and...IT WAS AMAZING! :D

Wow! First time reading yaoi, too. ;) You're an excellent writer! :D

Good job!

I must admit, I was a little put off by this story before I read it. For one, I'm not into yaoi for the most part (there are some yaoi couples I have a soft spot for, however). Secondly, it sort of seemed a little weird to me to have a RoxasXVentus pairing considering that they look practically identical.

However, I'm really glad I decided to give this a try because I found it to be a wonderful story. Your writing is definitely top-notch (I couldn't find a spelling/grammar error anywhere O.O;). You also seem to have a knack for writing, dare I say, hot romantic scenes XD

I hope you didn't get offended by that first part, but I just wanted you to know that as someone who is usually not a fan of these types of stories, I thought this story was amazing and beautifully written!

...W.O.W! Iz lovez it sooooooooo much eckkkkk *my girlie fangirl screams* hot damn that was cute and to think all Ven or Roxas had to do was have a convo with deep meaning and bam! gosh, I really love your stories very much sweetie...now I might rape your others...MWAH HAHAHAHAHAHA! Amazing and really I too think RokuVen needs more love!