hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhholy shit that got edgy

I don't trust the chief

rune: I'm sorry but you have to be at least a level four friend to unlock my tragic backstory

Damn, where to begin? The story, characters, humor, world... everything about this narrative was so well-crafted from beginning to end, feeling like a true continuation of the work Naughty Dog left open-ended through Jak 3 and Jak X and a passionate love letter to the franchise as a whole.

Sure, the writing has its ups and downs, but returning to this story over 6 years later, I can say with confidence that I'm completely satisfied and finally feel a sense of proper closure, for a video game series that I've wanted an official sequel to for years.

So thank you Nick for bringing us the Jak IV that Naughty Dog simply failed to deliver upon and I wish you well in your future ventures!

Hey Flygon, not sure if you are gonna be reading this but I hope you do. My original username was MiaqTheLiar and I reviewed a couple of chapters of this as it was coming out starting with chapter 22 I think, it's been a while. When I wrote that review I would have been in my last year of high school I think and now I'm in my last year of university doing a degree in history and politics. I've always sung my praises for this and I always will, it was amazing to read this as it was coming out and helped to keep the story of my favourite games alive. I've just finished re-reading this for I believe the eleventh time and I'm sure it won't be the last either. It will always be one of my favourite stories and one I'll always come back to. I wish you the best of luck in everything that you are doing and hope that it's making you happy.
LususLudus/ aka. MiaqTheLiar

P.S: RWBY Is getting fantastic right? XD

Keira Hagai shall not be killed off from the Jak and Daxter series! We want Keira to appear in more Jak and Daxter games and we want her to star in her own game! Okay! Can you do Jak V where Jak and Daxter learn that Keira is still alive and she had been rescued by someone from falling into the fiery wreckage. Jak and Daxter are on a quest to find Keira and reunite with her. Can you do a sequel! Can you call it Jak V: Errol's Revenge, Jak V: The Search for Keira, Jak V: The Revenge of Errol, Jak V: At World's End or Jak V: Night of the Dark Makers?

Can you do the sequel to Jak IV? It's called Jak V!

It is about that Keira is still alive and she nearly falls a hundred feet into the burning building. Jak and Daxter learn that Keira didn't die and the Metal Heads didn't kill her. But Keira is rescued by someone from falling into the wreckage below. Jak and Daxter are on a quest to find Keira.

Do not kill Keira off the Jak and Daxter series, okay? Can you do the fanfiction for Jak V, okay?

Veri n1c3rDist0riLT

I know you probably won't read this but seriously why nymph its just so unbelievably clichebut OK all the same I guess

*excited screech noise intensifies*

Just telling you something cool.

The novel eragon, (which is very popular), is 157k words. You have written a story that has practically 500k words. You have written a full length novel. Mate, you should be proud of yourself for writing a phenomenal story that is FULL LENGTH. You have intrigue, strong characters, no OP characters either. You have put tons of effort into this book, because that is what it is. This isn't a simple fan fic. You can cross this off of a bucket list, or write this down as a HUGE milestone in your life - write a book. Be proud mate.

Va fail gwynbleidd.
Sasayaku Chikage

Sounds cool! I hope you message us when the edits are done. Happy Holidays! :D

Sweet Christ this has been quite the ride.

And arguably, one of my favorite ones. I am sorry that I have been so late to make it to the end, to finish this. I didn't want it to be over.

But here we are. And i don't think I could have been happier with how it ended. A couple things:

1. Never forget you have a lot of talent. Keep doing what you love to do.
2. I will never forgive you for Beast.
3. DON'T LET ANYTHING BAD HAPPEN TO MAMA RUNE EVER 3

Wow. I've been reading this story over the past few days, and I gotta say it's one of the best Jak and Daxter stories I've ever read. The only rival I can think of is Blackened Hearts and Desert Pearls. To taking so long to write (3 years and so many months) this story is certainly epic. You've got talent breh. Use it well.

O.O I thought for sure that Stephen was Jet. Dang you write good.