I reread this because it had been a while and I’ve read a lot in the interim. Enjoyed it. What little of cannon characters there are seem right. It’s an original story. Grammar and spelling are all on point and there’s enough of a pull that I’m looking forward to future updates.

While at the beginning it was good, now I hate this fic.

1st you buff US,
2nd make Alesia bad decisions
3rd nerf Alesia...

And if U.S. refuses to join you, you will go to other countries!

About time

And welcome back

Why the hell was that idiot Ronson in charge? The least capable ship with the least capable commander. And on that why is the US AIR FORCE running ships? The US NAVY knows MORE than the USAF does on aircraft operations, and knows how to run ships and fleets as well. I don't know why SG's writers went for the USAF in the first place, totally clueless. The Navy, with Marines in tow, has ALL the bases covered. The USAF has NO ground troops as shown in SG1. The Marines (of course), and the Navy do. In the USAF someone with the speciality of SF in the USAF is not Special Forces - he's a guard or a air cop, nothing more. Clueless.

thanks for the new update

Sweet. I have been wanting to read more relating to this universe for quite a while... Thank you for your time and dedication to writing!

It lives!

Love oh love

Anubis is going to have to rely on subterfuge if he wants to take on an alliance of that caliber.
So I guess there'll be a Part 2 in the future then?

Lov

Take your time, we'll faithfully follow this fic.

Looks like the Alesians are going to war with the wraith. Time to see the PvZ action if you get the starcraft reference.

Well that's an unexpected turn of events. Let's see how receptive the Alesians are to diplomacy.

There are many similarities between the ancientsalesians and the BritishAmericans

yay

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)