I ran across your story over the weekend and found it to be quite the exciting read, and also a bit disappointed that it was unfinished. Are there any plans to continue it?

Hey there. I looked into this from Galaxy at War. It's been a while since you've updated this, eh? Nevertheless, this has so far been awesome. I really like how you've just created this entire alternate universe and just... Awesome! It seems to me that you could still write quite a bit from the way that you've left things hanging. So, keep up the good work! I'd really hate to see such a creative story go to waste.

Another great chapter.

Albeit that I truly do understand the nature of this particular chapter, I have to admit that I laughed at that last bit.

Anyway. Hi. Been watching this for a while, but only made that official earlier today. It's a very interesting story with a lot of good in it. Sure, there are some hole, but your writing ability allows you to skate over them and just keep going.

Love what you've done with this. Keep up the great work.

Wind to thy wings

Another great chapter.

and thats when hackett revealed that he disapproved of shepards relationship with liara, saying that shepard didn't activate the crucible because of his selfish desire to see liara again

Please update this soon for I am enjoying this immensely.

A fee probe is the lack of description of sword beating the reapers. Maybe do a flashback at some point from hacketts perspective to angle us how the beat up and damaged ragtag fleet won against the nearly indestructable god machines. Or whatever...

What I really like is the subtle after effects of the battle. Everyone reacted exactly how is imagine.

"Now that earth is saved let's now save my planet"

That was fine storytelling my friend and it seems to be clicking together nicely.

Also, I'm not sure if you recall but I sent two characters to your N7 fic. I wish to edit my human. Thankfully I strolls have time, hopfully to do that. I wanted to add to my review of N7 but I ended up here first. Soooooo, without furthur adieu, my new and improved character.

Name: Irving Wolfe

Race: human

Class: soldier

Weapon: M8 Avenger, N7 Crusader, armor piercing ammo mode for his weapons.

Appearance: all black body armor, red lights, three red strips up the torso (basically the second camp option)

Bio: if it ain't soldiering he has nothing to do with it. Throughout his N7 career he was known for his lone wolf tendencies. His focus on the mission is allways 100 %. He will gladly sacrifice hiimself for the sake of a succeessful op. Althought his skill and luck have managed to keep him alive for now. It is said, "need a job done? Send in the marines. Need the impossible done, send in the N7s. Need the suicidal done? Send in Irving"

A nice moment would be him explaining his preferance of assault rifle. His reason is that the Avenger class never fails and is a solid weapon to have, whereas the Mattock you basically need a wheelbarrow for all the clips you'll need and the vindicator feels like your holding a plastic toy gun. The crusader however is his baby and he's had since Tiffany ( Tiffany brings up bad memories for Irving and repeatedly avoids thee subject. He feels guilty for what happened there.)

So yeah, there you go. I believe this version is a lot more enteraining than the last. I guess I just didn't really think it through. Looking forward for the next update to both of your stories.

do you plan on continuing this fic? Because I've been enjoying it just as much as the n7 one

Hope you continue this. It's really well written :-)

another great chapter

"I debated that quite a lot, but my main thought was that if the dead Reaper in ME2 still maintained husks, they'd survive the death of the Reaper itself..."

If you are referring to the derelict Reaper it was technically still alive like for example the Cerberus Research team was getting indoctrinated, and also the Reapers Core or "heart" was also still running.

Wouldn't husk just fall apart due to the synthetic are the only thing holding them together due to no Reaper influence.

another great chapter

Very good better ending then Mass Effect 3. One question though what happened to the Rachni, and are their any Batarians left?

MUCH better than the actual ME3 ending - although I do wonder how Sword managed to destroy the Reaper fleet. I suppose destroying Harbinger and the Reapers surrounding the Crucible helped... Anyway, great job, and looking forward to seeing how this ends!