Ha! Oh, the irony. This one was great! I think you captured a random bystander's view on the team extremely well :)
Keep up the GREAT work!

I swear I tear up every time I read this one :(

Oh wow. This was fantastic!
I love how you don't name any names, but we can still figure out who is who with little difficulty. It's always interesting, and in this case refreshing, to see the main characters from a strangers point of view. And the coffee shop setting was gloriously creative! Hats off to you! :)

Aww then ending was sad, just like you said. But i still liked it :) Good work :D

Such a unique and intriguing view point! I normally do not read OC's POV because of the disconnect with the main characters. That said, you were able to draw me in and keep me interested in the story the whole time! I loved how Jenny saw her 4 special customers. It made for a fun read. I, too, hope the government wasn't lying and all American agents were safe :)

Very good! I feel you've kept them all in character, and it was refreshing to see them from an outside point of view. I really liked the dark edge to the ending. Kudos!

This story was wonderful! I love how you showed all the characters in a stranger's POV, it was detailed but never boring.

I was looking for you, or someone with your name that they use for anon reviews and happened to find this story which I find wonderful. After I received a review from someone using catfoxy as their anon name, on my latest story three wolves and a bobcat (also MI), I wanted to see if I could find that person since he/she has always left such awesome reviews on my MI stories.

Anyway, if you are the catfoxy that has been doing that, THANK YOU SO MUCH! I have been trying to find a way to say thanks for all your reviews but it's been interesting since all your reviews are anonymous.

If you are not the catfoxy who has done that, then thank you for creating this awesome story and ignore everything that is above!

Either way, HAVE A NICE DAY!

-Midnight

Oh, man, what a wrenching ending! Nice insights into their habits (and pretty funny that Ethan thinks he's being all 'stealth!mode' yet the shop girl is onto him!), and then wham! A kick to the emotions. The world's poorer for the loss.

Nicely done!

I love it! I find it so interesting how the story is from someone else's POV. D

Very good! I really like this outside POV! Although the ending was a bit sad. ;]

Thank you very much!

Interesting, a really different perspective to base this story on (and I honestly dont think I will be trying Jane's order any time soon). I really really liked this one!

I am going to trust the paper and assume that all agents made it home safely and right now the team is getting some well deserved rest and will be in next Tuesday...

What I like about these "other perspective" pieces (this and Cog in the Machine) is that nobody is named and we have to figure out who each person is by the details. Nice work!

I love the way you write! I always look forward to your next update! This was awesome! I love reading things from the POV of some less-than-significant character. It amazes me when I read/watch something and the main characters are talking about very sensetive things while there are servants/barristas/etc. all over the place! I can't imagine all the info they must get! This was a wonderful tribute to them!

So are they dead or still in the country fighting to get out or back home catching up on some R&R...? I would love maybe a little follow up for this!

Keep it up!

Arlothia