I could read it in their voices. Really enjoying it so far

This is hilarious, and your dialogue is spot on... Can definitely see this as an episode. That said, I thought the prose was a little flat and often read a bit like stage directions - perhaps a more streamlined technique? In any case, I enjoyed this - thank you for writing :-)

You've pretty much completely captured the essence of each of the characters in this: It's like you've simply taken it from the programme! Please update more? Loving it so far; especially the Patsy/Eddy banter :)

Wow! This this amazing you had me in stitches! You have captured Patsy and the others perfectly! Could we have more please? :)

This is a bit difficult to read at times, given the lack of punctuation in places, but you've really captured the spirit of the show: this feels like it could be taken right from an episode! I'm looking forward to seeing more. :)

please update. I love it.

ha. very good. and well written

you've written Patsy very well.