were is the rest of it

I vote for more jake pov. Bella's head isn't as fun!

Love your Charlie! Jake is awesome and brave for talking to him. I like that you captured the fact the name has known him all is life and would be comfortable talking to him. Good job!

Yeah! Good choice Bella! Love it.

I just read the first three chapters of your story and I really enjoyed it! I particularly liked the conversation between Jake and Charlie in the second chapter. You're doing a good job and I look forward to reading more.

Don't get too discouraged about the number of reviews you're receiving. I've read several stories that don't get many reviews at first and then suddenly the story catches on and the reviews start really increasing. :)

You did good! Keep it up!

Hey there,

I'm so glad to read a new chapter. It wasn't so bad, I really like it. It's nice to see that Charlie actually act like a father in your story. In SM's version he was just...I don't know, like inexistent!

What a temper, but I totally understand how Jake feels; he just won over Bella so it is normal for him to want to spend valuable time with her.

I can't wait to read Jake Pov! Should be interesting :-)

XoXo...Lylly ;-)

I looooove this chapter. I really like the bond between Charlie ans Jake. I'm glad you decided to continue the story in a multichapter.

I'm really looking forward to reading more.

XoXo Lylly ;-)

Your writing is amazing! Keep it up, this would be a great story to just focus on jacob & bella. Great story, keep it up! I love it! Your personification of the characters is very true to what I think they would sound like in this situation, great work!

Interesting... This is kinda like what I wrote. Anyway, it's good. I don't think Bella would've done that but she should've. The only problem is the language and more paragraphs would be nice. I would definately like to see more.

Yes! A review for you. Your writing is excellent. I heartily approve of your storyline as well. Couple of suggestions,...carefully proofread everything you write, if in doubt, find someone else, a fresh, unbiased pair of eyes to do it for you. Get them to specifically check spelling and grammar, but also sentence structure. Occasional mistakes will add up. As to your story path, you've made a terrific start, don't leave us hanging. These two belong together, I've always thought. If my wishes were answered, Jacob would eventually imprint on Bella. Heaven forbid he should imprint on anyone else! That would be too much to bear, but don't make it too easy for them or us. Keep a little conflict/dynamic going. I hope to see your next chapter very soon!

I can see it bring complete it was cute I liked out you could add on to it if you like I'll read I am looking forward to reading more from you

Omg I love this story. I enjoyed reading it. Well done. When are you next updating

I love it! Really. You did a fantastic job. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Of course I'd say YES continue the story.

Good idea for the non Edward showing. It could be a simple love story. Jake and Bella's relationship as she try to gain his trust. But please if you choose to do it that way, just add some "couple fight" because no one ever write Jake and Bella fighting, but real couple do fight sometimes. That's what make the relationship stronger. Not major fight, but you know what I'm talking about ;-).

I wanted to tell you also how much I like the way you write.

Hope to read you soon.

XoXo Lylly ;-)

Of course you should continue this. _ It's adorable.