Um guys don't talk like this and how did you keep describing unimportant moments and useless details about nothing, but not fully explain the kidnapping, Kabuto, Akame, and Noemi?

Future writers, use this story as an example of how not to write a story.

This story gets more ridiculous by the sentence. LOL I'm guessing you we're really young when you write this. The plot is fine, but the way the story unfolds is just not logical. You have plot holes, along with bad spelling and bad grammar, but I am enjoying the silliness of this fanfiction.

What the hell did I just read? Besides the bad grammar and misspellings, you seem to forget what you wrote in the previous chapters. There really is no flow in your story telling. You're obsessed with how others look at Sakura and Sasuke together (and how Sakura doesn't know how to walk without Sasuke catching her, why is she always tripping?) that you are not paying any attention in writing a good story.

fellow author
it's always fascinating when we come across such potential that you possess and I must say that you should keep up the good work, there is always room for improvement. also Africa does have internet and yes it works.
all the best!
Sweet_Sounds_Of_Magic!DarkBlossom31

Dear Author,
I really enjoy reading your stories, for this chapter however I felt obligated to inform you that Africa does in fact have internet.
Keep Up The Good Work!
Best Regards,
DarkBlossom31 SweetSoundsOfMagic

It would be great if you would double check your work. The amount of spelling errors is actually quite shameful considering Microsoft word, google docs, notepad, and a dictionary/thesaurus exists and did at the time you posted this, age isn’t an excuse either. I’m just wondering how you could perfectly write Hinata’s stuttering, and spend no respectful time correcting your misuse of words, “women/ woman”, and usage of words that don’t even correlate to the sentence it is placed in. I don’t like to give bad feedback, especially on such a cute story. But most big events in this story came out of nowhere, how did she find her parents? Can’t even remember with all the unnecessary Drabble that is in place of descriptions of things as basic as a cup, or blade of grass. You have great potential, but don’t be naive; you and I both know you should put more pride in your work by correcting the little things that shine brightly when you least expect. Forget my comment about the descriptions being a bit too in-depth. Just...pay attention to your spell corrector, always type in a document file first, and finally copy and paste. You might take this comment hard, but someone has to push you to do better, don’t be disheartened. Just improve a little more every day a dremember, fanfiction is just as important to the reader as it is to you. You took time to write, so show that you’re competent and proud by fixing things that are that simple.

Even Anko ships them

I love this story! Great job :D

I just saw on her board, and people were asking why it was reported and deleted from her profile, and she said (and I quote), "Bc they said it didn't follow Wattpad protocol I have no idea why though."
XD

AWWW, GAARA YOU SWEETHEART! 33333

Chidori? I can imagine Mikoto running to him squealing, "Chidori!" LMFAO

So fucking cute!

Omg please make a sequel even if its a oneshot only, please please please

I love this story can u please make a sequal like please it is very good unless you are still going to continue this story than just update please like pretty please with froyo on top

oh. I'm glad that the issue has been solve. actually, I'm a wattpad writer too and I think I came across that story when I'm browsing for fairytail fan fiction sometime ago. I never know that it is plagiarized until I read your notice. I really despise people who copy other's works without having the decency to at least inform the original creator or giving them credits. something like this happen to my friend. she loves to write poems on her journal and she is really good at it. but then one of our classmates told her that she only copy it on a website which I can't remember the name. to prove that she didn't copy it she showed us the dates on her journal and it does not tally with the post in said website. we later found out that one of girl in another section who was a friend of her was the one posting it. the situation quiet got out of hand but is ow okay. though she is now anxious of writing more poems because of the incident. I really love her poems but I can't force her to write more. I hope everyone will be aware that just because this issue has been solve it does not mean it does not have some after effect to the original creator. but anyway. don't worry about that reader, there are really just some people who likes to see others suffer. God bless you.