Good fic. I don't like Fin much though, I don't like anyone who'd betray Sirius like that... just cause of that fight... *sigh* well anyway but good fic, you're a great writer.

That was soo incredibly good and sad! I hate things like that, when the person leaves after a fight and dies, its horrible! But that fic was great!

-Jenjerman of Jenjermannorm

Very evocotive; shows us the highest highs and the lowest lows of their life together. When I read the "fake break-up" (Fin pushing Sirius away knowing that she's about to leave him to join the DE's) I would have loved to have known what she was really thinking/feeling at that moment. I assumed you weren't sharing that because you were limiting us to Sirius's POV. But then, the end in Azkaban was Fin's POV. Since dementors force you to relive the worst moment of your life, maybe we could get a glimpse of what she had been thinking & feeling when she left Sirius. Just a thought.

One thing that bothered me slightly-Sirius's repeated insistence that he had to fix his bike in order to get to work. Can't he just apparate? Or floo? Or fly a broom? Maybe you have a reason he needed his bike-what is it?

Weaver...I clearly remember repeating the word "happy" several times! But it was still pretty good. Excellent, actually. Poor Sirius.

wow... that's really good, and i like it much! it's very sad and the song fits it perfectly. i like it very much and i hope to see more from you!

~Jamie _

weaver! i'm crying!

...ok, i'm not, but that's because i'm a cold heartless bitch! this is the saddest thing ever...my poor sirius...you are an amazing writer, weaver, i want to be you! :) ok, so, hypocritical as it is, stop reading this and go work on fidelius week! i need my sirius fix!

Oh weaver,

That was so sad and yet so beautiful like nothing I've read before. I like the way you describe things as 'now' like "Fin steps onto the dance floor" instead of saying "fin stepped into the dance floor". I like that style. Also the idea of having their romantic date in Australia is awsome. I can imagine the deserts of outback, the sea with warm breeze, the skies with the shiney stars - it comes to such a wonderful image. I thought you could make them lose their way in the desert, surviving on nothing much but what ever was there. Did fin committ suicide just because she had an argument with Sirius? What a sensitive girl!

But this is great, I must say one story truly inspiring - and I am not only saying this cause ur my friend. This is good work!