It's true though! Serena does always turn to Raye in times of need. And it's the same for Raye! It's a really sweet friendship!

I like this story so I apologize that I'm going to offer spelling corrections right off the bat. Peer should be pier, peer means a fellow student if you're a student. Also used as a jury expression "you will be judged by a jury of your peers". Pier is a place on the water, kinda like a port. And sore in the 3rd to last paragraph should be soar the way you are using it.

Like the idea, like the story. I look forward to reading more of your fics.