Happy birthday to your big brother! And great story! Keep making more!
~ Janna_sassy_loser~

i like that blackstar better

I thought it was a good story. I liked it alot

Lol. Poor maka.

There is a lot simpler way to solve this
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"Work smarter, not harder" ~My honors algebra teacher from this past year. We both get out hair cut by the same lady. And she was my adviser. Wait... Why am I telling you all this random crap? Why am I rambling? I need to practice piano after this... But I'm hungry cause it's lunch time... Mmmmm I want I grilled cheese! But that has a ton of butter... And butter is oils and fat and I'm trying to eat less oils and fat... Oh screw it, grilled ham cheese and mustard with buttery toasty bread it is.

I wasn't crying but I was on the verge of breaking out in tears

Lol I felt like crying too

No kiss WTF

Man it was so damn good! Te ending, well it was PREFECTO! This story was so good, I'm so sad that it ended. But oh well. You should keep making soul eater fanfic's, you're really good at it, especially SoMa fics. Keep writing author!

Lol x infinity. My god, I love the part where Soul made Maka say thank you. It was how Maka reacted with him. Man I just can't stop laughing. I'll never take it back, you're the best author ever

Man I never ever thought Maka could be that mean. I wish make her that mean, and very 'sunshine city'. I don't like the name, it sound too cheesy, I'm not criticizing I'm just saying. Anyways the story is going awesome ats usual. You very are a awesome writer.

I love the ending... But I wish that they would have kissed... Instead of just that one kiss thnx to BlackStar...

I started laughing SOOO hard when BlackStar said "And I look the best" :)

HAHAHA IN YO FACE KID! *drops microphone*

In chapter 16 Kidd sounds jelly... I LOVE IT! Deal with it Kidd... It's Soul and Maka now! MUAHAHAHA!