Gureuhr! L! Nooooo! Damn iiittttt! Isn't Beyond Birthday his brother?! Wtf was that?! Shit! Poor L! I really hope Watari realizes it's not L that returned! I'll definately check out that sequel!

welll shit ! Crazy ! Ahah, gonna go read the sequel now !

this was amazingly sadistic and most likely had every Maoist squirming in pure delight I loved it I applaud your fic outstanding

... Oh my god. You're awesome! I-I can't even say anything, I'm just sitting here, and staring at my cellphone. So great! The atmosphere, darkness, all of it! Great!

I shall give you my favorite.

Whoaaaa, that was crazy :O

This was amazing, I love how you wrote it, how you portrayed both L and BB , the fact you added those excerpts from songs, everything! I will read now the sequel, can't wait to read more of your work. Wish you the best :) xx

! LLLLLLLL! TTTT

Gonna read the sequel!

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

This was intense.
You captured B's crazy, which is very, very hard to do, and I almost felt every break.
Good job.

Yay! BB-kun is free! :D

You never know, B, that someone is watching L...Anyone who tries to hurt L will not go unpunished...

wooow that was great. Not used to read in english but I wish French authors can just write stuffs like that.
My god, I loved it so much. That's probably the first time I see BB being exactly HOW he should be.
French people always turn him into a stupid nice psycho who didn't act because of madness or cruaulty but only because he loved L.
Damn it, this is just a fucking fight for being the best!
Damn, I really, really, enjoy this one-shot, so pure.
Thanks you for this.

I would have traduced it immediatly if French fandom wasn't so prude.

I like this story too. I might just add both to my favorites. Don't think I'm gay or emotional when I say this but you almost made me cry when reading it. Almost. The whole violence scene. I hated it and loved it at the same time. I hated it because it made me remember things I wish would rather stay forgotten. I loved it because even though it brings back appealing memories for me I adore violence and gore with a passion. Good story anyway. I may favorite your squeal to this tomorrow. Depends.

This was a good read. It was written beautifully and kept my interest throughout. I'm a sucker for darkfics, especially ones involving noncon (as disturbed as that sounds). You wrote it really well.
I'm not very familiar with the series or the chacters, I know who they are because well its a popular series but I never really watched the whole thing.
This fanfic makes me want to do that. And I probably will. )
Thank you for sharing this

This is honestly one of the best and most twisted stories I've ever read...
Great Job. :D

This was honestly THE BEST fanfic I have read in my entire life. The characters were portrayed PERFECTLY, the plot was absolutely AMAZING, and, just... It was all around amazing. I loved how you put in the inner thoughts. Also, I think the way you showed Beyond's insanity was absolutely amazing. You described everything so well that I could picture it almost clearly in my head, even though that may sound disturbing for some parts, but I'm being complete serious. I could go on forever, but I'll leave you with that. GREAT story, honestly.