Beau is a boyfriend/male admirer. It is not a girlfriend/female admirer. Belle is the closest, but not the same.

Wow, honestly wow, I liked this story from start to finish, all the intrigue, the fights, the characters' reasons like that of Phil and Chamcaster, the whole story itself. Enjoy reading it from the beginning, and if you do a sequel or something I will be pending to also read it.

awesome

I read this story all the way through yesterday, and your right about Charmcaster. I like this version of her story a lot better. The Brozz reminded me of this villain from a book series I read a few years ago, can't remember the title. It was about a group of kids trying to beat this guy who can adapt to any power or attack. I would like to see this Ben 10 universe expanded, especially after the just released charmcaster omniverse episode, which was awful for the character. Any chance for a sequel soon?

you need to make a sequel pls ill give you cookis if you do

and get gwen and charmcaster together they belong together

if for no other reason do it to fix what omniverse has done to gwen

great fanfic

loved the story. I really hope you do come back to this universe.

I absolutely LOVED this! I honestly think that this should have been animated or made into a movie or something. It was just so wonderful! It was really easy to imagine this actually being on TV, and it got me actually feeling anticipation and other emotions, so your writing is really effective.

Although, there is something that confuses me in the chapter entitled "Stumble." I thought Gwen was with Charmcaster in Ledgerdomain, but then you place her with Ben and Max. I was really confused with that, and thought I missed something. I probably did miss something, or it was a continuity error in your fic. It was still amazing though.

Honestly, I do hope you go back to this, as you call it, universe. I'm so happy that there is fanfiction, because whenever the canon fails, we can just make our own stories and fix the canon's mistakes. Like what you did. If only this was what really happened. Anyways, in the end, I'm left with so much questions about the aftermath. Why would Azmuth say that the team deserves a second chance? A second chance at what? And what about "Guardian Gwendolyn?" What's with that title? But of course this is entirely your decision if you ever want to return to this universe. Don't have to if you don't want to.

And now for the romances in this fic. I loved the love triangle, if that's the right term, between Ben, Julie, and Kai. I'm surprised she (Kai) hasn't made a reappearance in the series... It seemed to me that Alien Force and Ultimate Alien were kind of bent on creating drama, so I wonder why they didn't bring Kai back. My inner Gwevin fangirl was squealing at the scenes that involves Gwen and Kevin. It just seemed like it could actually happen. The Kevin/Kai ship is very interesting, and I can't say I dislike it. In fact, I loved it. I also loved the scenes that had Charmcaster and Gwen. It was subtle. but still obviously there. It was like subtext that actually happens in the series. And I can't deny the cuteness between Max and Verdona.

Well, I think I covered everything I wanted to say... Again, this was a GREAT story.

Ps. I'm scared of watching Omniverse (I haven't watched an episode).
Pps. Did I mention how well I thought everyone was in character?

That was epic! This is the best Ben Ten fanfiction I have read for a long time. Thanks for writing it!

I cried reading your epilogue talking about how the hacks working on "Ultimate Alien" ruined poor Charmy. That's how I felt too. I will forever accept this fic as my own personal canon rather than the crap that aired on TV. Even if Charmy ends up being better portrayed in "Omniverse", it still won't make up for the sins "Ultimate Alien" committed against her.

This was a magnificent story and I am thankful for the omniverse that is going to come out. Because it made me curious if there were any good Ben 10 fanfictions out there and find a good one I did.

Good work and congratulations on finishing, you have a great mindset for these and I do hope to see the more daunting crisis that was coming in your writing.

Thank you for sharing this story.

ULTIMATE BEN! Very nice touch, there.

Very interesting story, I read it in one sitting and I must say that save for a few spelling errors you really did a good job at writing this.

Can't wait for the next chapter(s)

Yep, they are definitely Ben's ancestors; brave and caring just like him. Something tells me that whatever Brozz is doing or did is involved in the future.

Once again, history proves beating aliens runs in Tennyson blood. Also, adding Charmcaster was a nice touch, but bringing Phil back was brilliant. I'm surprised they haven't brought him back on the show, or Kai. As for Paradox, Phil, and Charmcaster, I have a feeling the stopping himself has something to do with what he said about 'finding some other kid'.