i hope you update soon,and cool fanfiction i really love it .

oh no. now Tibar is out for revenge. Things just keep snowballing dont they.
Good to see you back. Looking forward to the next chapter

This story is so...frekin AMAZING! I like it a lot much better then other ones I read of female assassins! Red actually has good flwas and she is no Mary sue...you made this a good story! Ah one female that actually isn't like one of the best assassins out there. And one last thing O_O wow she faints or blacks out hehe anyway great work. I applaude you in this work :)

thank you for writing another chapter! I adore this story so much! Can't wait for more!

Oh, this is a bit of a sad chapter. Really sad.

Please keep writing! I absolutely adore this story and your a very good writer!

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oh my! You killed Rahman. Did not see that coming. yeah, he was an annoying brat, but, wow. Poor kid.

And what a cliffy to leave us on! Dont keep us so long, pretty pretty please.

wow, good chapter. I like the little amnesia touch, sort of. She is still gonna be devastated when she remembers/is told though.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Im not logged love the non Mary sue of a character.

Oh boy. She is in sooo much trouble. Hurry Malik!

Haven't reviewed in a while... Anyways, I really like this story. It's not one of those mushy gushy love stories where a Mary Sue instantly becomes an assassin and has a guy chasing after her **coughcoughmalikcoughcoughalt ycoughcoughcough**. AND she isn't extremely talented.
Also, great chap. A bit sad.

oh. That was a bit of a sad episode. I mean, Asif wasn't like a main character or anything, but Red. Well, she has taken it very very hard hasnt she. Poor girl.

He kicked the horse! I know nothing about the child, but I already do not like him. Thats some good writing. Well done. I also liked the time jump. I think that will aid a successful story progression. And we get to see Malik again! YAY.

I think I should stop being a ghost reader...So I'll stop being one.

I'm really interested in this story. I find it unique in its own way. I'll be looking forward for the chapters to come.