This is very good! Me gusta.

Omg, I love this story so much! I've read all the chapters and your amazing at suspence *Shakes with excitment* I cant wait for the next chapter! Keep writing!

Again AMAZING

The characters were perfectly role played as and the detail was amazing i felt as if i was reading an actually published novel that was writin by the best of the best which it was... Taiwan, China, and Russia and knowing that i know these writers is amazing compared to my writing im nothing but a speck in the entire universe.

phew, somewhat confusing writing style, what with all the pov swtiches, haha. it's understandable, though, since more than one person worked on the story! grammar and spelling are flawless, however. i tend to avoid fics with a lot of character death but this one's really interesting so far! keep it up.

This is well written, I hope you continue :B

Wow this is intense. I hope you continue with your work! I'll definitely keep looking for more stuff written by you!