Reviews for dreams that are cruel |
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Guest chapter 7 . 7/9/2012 Sniffle... This is sad... But very well written. Great job. |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 7 . 6/3/2012 So the most important thing was that he needed to remember what he did, wasn't it? I got it. Great idea. I do hope they will be okay now. Great story. Congratulations. I loved it. Sadie |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 6 . 6/3/2012 Irmo? What the...? It was s surprise to me. Can't wait to read the next. Sadie |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 5 . 6/3/2012 Another chapter that gave me chills. I was wondering if it was just a bad dream, but now I am not sure. I'll continue reading. Sadie |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 4 . 6/3/2012 Oh Gosh. You have so fabulous ideas. I can't stop reading it. Sadie |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 3 . 6/3/2012 I feel like agreeing to AzureSkye23's theory. Another great chapter. Sadie |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 2 . 6/3/2012 These brothers have the most thrilling stories. I couldn't keep my eyes of this one. Great job. Sadie |
Sadie Sill - English stories chapter 1 . 6/3/2012 I always made a lot of confusion with all these different names LOL. It took me a bit to understand who were who but when my stupid mind finally realized what was going on I was astonished. What a great story. It gave me chills. Great great. Sorry for taking so long to start reading this pieces of art. I am glad I could do it today. love Sadie |
mornnenn chapter 2 . 5/7/2012 I loved the first line. You have such a way with beginnings. I don't know why this chapter reminds me of "The Grapes of Wrath", but it does. I shouldn't have said that, I'll regret it later, but I'm too tired to write a coherent review, and too much a light sleeper to go to bed with a baby crying so... Can I please just say that I loved the part where Tylelkormo dies without sounding mean? It was so /beautiful/. I mean the 'stay with me' 'yes, but stay with me'. The crying of blood. The holding of the hands, the missing finger. The imagery was fantastic. *shakes head* If I could find the words to say it, I would, but I can't so...*leaves review off in utter, awed silence* |
AzureSkye23 chapter 7 . 4/18/2012 Well, this was disturbing, and beautiful, though I'm still kinda unsure why it was so important Maedhros realized he killed himself. Still, good job! |
AzureSkye23 chapter 6 . 4/18/2012 I'm just going to say, that I'm kinda disturbed by Irmo's methods. Still, if they worked... |
AzureSkye23 chapter 5 . 4/18/2012 Ok, Maedhros is dead, I'm fairly sure of it. And blaming himself for his brother's death, I see... |
AzureSkye23 chapter 4 . 4/18/2012 Yep, still dead. The fact that Maedhros can't remember any of his life in Middle-earth is interesting...Now I'm wondering if *he's* dead. |
AzureSkye23 chapter 3 . 4/18/2012 Hmm, I see my theory is holding weight still... |
AzureSkye23 chapter 2 . 4/18/2012 Okay...Mouth back. Hmm. Maglor lived, but now Celegorm died...I wonder if their fates are mirroring reality... |