Reviews for Dance of Slavery
no one needs to chapter 20 . 7/15/2019
Are you kidding me? What are you doing, waiting for a hundred million likes?! Not trying to be harsh, but you REALLY need to update! Please? For the sake of atla lovers?
Twowillows chapter 1 . 6/28/2018
Okay...if you got melted liquid metal running down your wrists a little aloe is NOT going to help! It would destroy your flesh and it would be excruciating...
Lizzy-Margaret chapter 26 . 1/4/2018
I really loved this story. I'm happy you didn't go with the other ending you had in mind. I'm a sucker for happy endings and if you killed everyone off, it wouldn't be preferable. All in all, I really loved the story, though. Honestly, it's one of the better ones ;D
angelacullen1170 chapter 17 . 11/29/2016
Zuko gets me sooooo mad why did he do that
Just say yes father and take your ass back to your room and plot with aang and katara. OMG!
Nymphoftheglade chapter 12 . 10/17/2016
ah. For authenticity's sake I'd just like to say, in Chinese, we says (name of person) Goong Zhu in this case Katara GongZhu unlike in the Western world where you would say Princess Katara. Just saying to make the story more authentic!
Guest chapter 26 . 1/19/2016
Oh my goooooodness
Well I'll admit I'm kinda dissapointed the defeat of Ozai was so... simple. But damn you really sent the message of 'eternal love' out there. At first I wasn't gonna read the original ending, but I gave in and I'll tell you it made me cry. Really good writing and this was definitely something different and had many things I was not expecting.

Ps: my only complaint is that I didnt like the fact that zuko slapped Katara a few times inthe beginning. .. I mean even in his worst days (aka ponytail days), I felt he had a sense of respect; especially towards women... ahhh i dont know he just seems like the type that would respect a woman no matter what.
But regardless, great story!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/18/2016
Quick question about thus chapter... at the beginning when Zuko is "Talking to the moon"... was this inspired by Bruno Mars' song? Because I started fangirling so hard when I read it lol
If it's not, then I don't care because I'll still relate it to Bruno's song whoops
FayeTheBitch chapter 17 . 7/6/2015
Couldn't Zuko have just burned Ozai to death while he couldn't move? Just saying.
patricia chapter 10 . 3/1/2015
Am I enserio angry, for that katara of supporting all the humiliations while zuko don't tries to apologize? I cannot stand that you speak on her interior fire that has katara but you make her act as the submissive one.
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
Wow love this very much teheh
naeoff18 chapter 24 . 8/25/2014
This chapter brought me to tears. My life is over. This chapter has ruined me. MEH. :''''''(
naeoff18 chapter 10 . 8/20/2014
Holy crap... C-c-can I just b-be Katara!?
WolfDreams14 chapter 17 . 8/24/2013
OMFG! This is amazing! Ty Lee is so bad ass! This story you have written is so good. I just plain out love it.
WolfDreams14 chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
Mai, that Bitch! If only she was dead. But at least it gives your story interst, but I was already interested before. Now that Mais in the story... I want to see what happens to her. Man, I'm so excited yet, I feel so mad, I dislike Mai with a burnjng pasion.
Anyways, the story so far is really good.
EmeraldTyphoon47 chapter 22 . 8/17/2013
This is quite simply THE most amazing Aavatar fanfic I've ever read! You've managed to write a story where the characters act in a believable way and also managed to present a Zutara scenario that was both plausible and nice to read. I particularly liked how you managed to give Azula a backstory to make her more sympathetic and also your spelling, grammar, and vocab were top-notch and much better than most authors on this site.
Overall an excellent story. Btw, I've started reading the sequel, and I hope you update soon
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