Lovely

Aw! *hug* Gracias, mi amiga! I loved it~ This will forever be treasured~ Ahaha~ This was so cute. It made my heart feel warm and fluffeh. Best way to start the day. X3 Extra points for including the Bad Touch Trio in~! *heart*

-Warning: This is a complete turnaround from the usual side you see from me-

Anyway, the plot and structure was good. But there were some spelling errors. But none that makes a sentence, or the whole story, hard to understand, though. Just minor spelling errors. So, I would recommend a quick proofread? Also, yes, I have to admit Lovino was a tad bit OOC, but it's fine. It wasn't too much, and it's understandable since Lovino is the lovable little Tsundere we know, and he has to let out his dere dere side at some point, so, you're good. All in all, it was a good fanfic.

-And I'm back~! X3-

I really did love it and if I had my printer with me in the living world, I would have printed it without a second thought. *heart* Gracias again. And, YOU GET A COOKIE FOR THIS. And pasta. Lots and lots of Pasta from our beloved Ita-chan. X3 And hugs. And kitties. X3 *superawesomeglompftw!* Well, I'm going to end my review now. Thanks again, and again, and again. I love you buddy. Seriously. XD You made my day.

~Beyond_Madness

I'm SO glad that I clicked this fanfic, honestly. It made my night a bit brighter.

There are two things I noticed that may be an issue in your future writing; one of those things is the copious amount of grammar and spelling errors. All you've gotta do is re-read your fics before ya post em, and fix any mistakes.

The second is the little time skips. The story flows pretty nicely, but the time skips sort of break that orderly flow. It wouldn't be a problem if you had one every now and again, but just try to make sure that they're not TOO frequent.

Now, other than those two things, I loveloveLOVED this. 8D At first, the plot seemed pretty common, as far as Spamano fics go, but then when it took such a big turn, I actually got really excited. XD I loved the way Spain tackle-hugged Romano- the way you described it somehow made it seem very original- and the, "I may be an idiot sometimes, but I'm your idiot," near the end was just ugjiehf. You don't seem to get lines like that too often in Spamano fics, unfortunately.

Last of all, at the very end, where you compared love to a bird, somehow seemed like the most perfect way to finish it off. Just beautiful.

All in all, this was a terrific fic, and I implore you to keep on writing!